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Band 4+: The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

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The image shows two data visualizations: a line graph and a pie chart. The line graph illustrates the number of book borrows from June to September for four locations: West Eaton with 50 (June), 100 (July), 150 (August), 200 (September); Ryeslip with 300 (June), 250 (July), 200 (August), 50 (September); Sutton Wood with 150 (June), 100 (July), 50 (August), 300 (September); Church Mount with 200 (June), 150 (July), 100 (August), 250 (September). The pie chart details the percentage of book types borrowed: Self-Help 10%, Fiction 43%, History 14%, Science 14%, Biography 19%.

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The line chart illustrates how many books were borrowed from 4 village libraries, for 4 months period in 2014

Overall, the number borrowed books varied across the library, Ryeslip decreased, when the others west eaton and church mount increased over time. Meanwhile, the suttonwood had a fluktuation, decreased in august and had a massive recovery in September.

The most significant features in the graph is Suttonwood. in June, suttonwood had borrowed from around 250 and then had a marked decreased in August, before finally made a highest climb about 300 books in September. On the other hand West Eaton as well as Church Mounth had a similiarity 50 borrowed books in June, furthermore they had stable growth in September around 150 books.

Regarding to the graph, Despite of the others village libraries had increased number of books borrowed, Ryeslip nevertheless decreased sharply since June, from 300 to about below 200 in September.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some areas for improvement. The overview is present but could be more comprehensive by mentioning the pie chart and the book type percentages. The body paragraphs focus primarily on the line graph, and the analysis could be more detailed and include specific data points to support the observations. The writing contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which affect clarity. To improve, ensure a balanced discussion of both visuals, use precise language, and proofread carefully for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear overall structure and the progression of ideas is not always logical. The introduction is present, but the overview could be more comprehensive, summarizing the main trends from both the line graph and the pie chart. Paragraphing is attempted, but the connections between sentences and paragraphs need improvement to ensure a smoother flow of information. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and there are instances of imprecise word choice ('fluktuation,' 'similiarity,' 'Mounth'). While the report conveys the general information, it lacks the range and sophistication required for a higher score. Try to incorporate a wider variety of vocabulary related to trends, changes, and comparisons. Focus on using more precise and accurate language to describe the data.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. There are also issues with article usage and prepositional phrases. To improve, focus on practicing grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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