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Band 6+: The line graph shows the number of enquires to tourist information office made by telephone, letter/ email, and in person from January 2001 to June 2001.

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The image presents a line graph illustrating the number of inquiries received by tourist information offices from January to June 2001, categorized by "In person," "By telephone," and "By email/letter." In January, "In person" inquiries were just above 400, climbing steadily to reach over 1800 by June. "By telephone" inquiries started at approximately 900 in January, experiencing a slight dip in February but gradually increasing to reach around 1600 by June. "By email/letter" inquiries began at about 780 in January, declined consistently throughout the period to slightly above 300 by June.

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The line graph illustrates the quantity of requests to tourist data office made by telephone, letter/ email, and face to face from the start of 2001 to June 2001.

Overall, it is noticeable that demands made by phone and in person generally increased, unlike the number of emailed enquires, and all of the lines changed steadily over the years.

To begin, telephone requests stood at 800, while in-person enquires stand at their lowest number of 400.In the next two months, the quantity of calls experienced slight decrease to about 780, then came back to their starting number, whereas questions asked in person rose dramatically, doubling in size.From match to april, telephone calls maintained the same level, and face-to-face conversations continued to increase, reaching 900.Over the following three months, the number of both telephone calls and real life dialogues grew considerably, reaching their peak of 1100 and 1200 respectively.

In contrast with in-person and telephine talks, the number of demands by email started at 600 in January, remaining stable for three months.In the spring season, the quantity of emails and letters dropped sharply to 400, and faced a significant fall to 200 in the following month.

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telephone: 4

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calls: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall trend, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The data for telephone inquiries is misreported (starting at 800 instead of 900, and final value 1100 instead of 1600), and in-person inquiries are understated (final value 1200 instead of 1800). Email/letter inquiries are also inaccurately described (starting at 600 instead of 780, and final value 200 instead of 300). Additionally, the report omits the initial dip in telephone inquiries in February and the consistent decline of email/letter inquiries from January. The structure is clear, but the inaccuracies in key data detract from the overall task achievement. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately reported and include all significant trends, such as the steady decline of email/letter inquiries throughout the period.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview, and it groups information logically. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'all of the lines changed steadily over the years' is vague). Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively managed to separate trends more clearly. Use cohesive devices more naturally to guide the reader through the data.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increased', 'declined', 'rose dramatically', 'dropped sharply'), but some word choices are imprecise or informal (e.g., 'requests', 'demands', 'real life dialogues', 'telephine talks'). The report would benefit from more precise and formal academic vocabulary, such as 'inquiries', 'face-to-face', and 'correspondence'. Avoid repetition and ensure terms are used consistently.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity (e.g., 'enquires' should be 'inquiries', 'stand' should be 'stood', 'From match to april' should be 'From March to April', and missing commas). Some sentences are run-ons or awkwardly constructed. To improve, proofread carefully and vary sentence structures while ensuring grammatical accuracy.

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