Line Graph

Band 5+: The line graph shows the percentage of people living in urban areas in three countries (Country A, Country B, and Country C) from 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a line graph titled 'Percentage of Population in Urban Areas (2000-2020)' for three countries. For Country A, the percentages were: 2000, 39%; 2005, 49%; 2010, 59%; 2015, 67%; 2020, 73%. For Country B, the percentages were: 2000, 34%; 2005, 42%; 2010, 51%; 2015, 59%; 2020, 65%. For Country C, the percentages were: 2000, 30%; 2005, 36%; 2010, 44%; 2015, 50%; 2020, 56%.

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The line chart demonstrates the percentage of the whole citizens living in metropolitan areas in three different countries over a 20-year period, from 2000 to 2020.

Overall, it’s clear that country A showed a significant increase, while country B followed an opposite trend of country A. However, country C remained relatively stable over the period. Moreover, country A was the highest percentage of population, while country C was the lowest.

In detail, firstly, though country B’s percentage of pupulation was 60 in 2000, it sharply descreased to 45% in 2020. Secondly, the country A was 35 percentage of population in 2000, while it faced a significant increase over the period. By the end of the period it went up highest peack point at 72 pecentage of population in 2020, between three countries. Lastly, the country C faced a very different apporch. While other countries showed a trend, country remained relatively stable over the period. Furthermore, the percentage was 15 in 2000 and it increased highest at 17% in 2016. Then, in 2020, it descreased to 16%.

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country: 10

percentage: 5

period: 5

while: 4

countries: 3

highest: 3

population: 3

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The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies in word choice (e.g., 'pupulation,' 'descreased,' 'peack,' 'apporch'). There is also some repetition of words and phrases (e.g., 'percentage of population,' 'over the period'). To improve lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to describing trends and changes (e.g., 'increased,' 'decreased,' 'fluctuated,' 'remained stable'). Use a thesaurus to find synonyms for overused words and phrases. Pay attention to the correct spelling and usage of words.

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