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The image depicts changes in a seaside area from 1995 to the present, showing the transformation of various land uses and infrastructure. In 1995, notable features include forest park, housing area, farmland, shops, hotel, fish market, road paths, cafe, and fishing port by the sea. In the present, the farmland is replaced by a golf area, and a tennis area is added near the newly outlined housing. The restaurant replaces shops, and the hotel remains, now accompanied by a car park. The fish market and some cafes have been substituted with apartments, retaining the original road framework and sea adjacent designation.

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The two maps illustrate the transformation of a seaside area from 1995 to present.

Overall,construction has been the highlight of the modification of the seaside area as many shelter leisure providing buildings have been erected.Places that offered boost to economy such as seafood related infrastructure has been demolished.

In the north-east,there used to be forest and farmland,now they have been replaced by leisure providing activities of golf and tennis.Moreover,shop and fish market which used be on either side of the road which takes you to hotels,now serve as restaurant and sea facing apartments respectively.

Further alterments that are significant are the inclusion of car park near hotel and extension of the road to in north-west which provides a way for new houses.Additionally,fising port has been eliminated completely.Although many changes have taken place,but cafe and hotel have found them intacton map.

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Task Response

The report addresses the main changes shown in the maps and provides an overview of the transformation. However, there are several inaccuracies in the description of the data and some issues with clarity. For instance, the report claims the fishing port was eliminated, which may not be supported by the visual description, and the phrasing regarding 'seafood related infrastructure' is somewhat vague. To improve, focus on using more precise vocabulary for changes (e.g., 'converted', 'transformed', 'relocated') and ensure that the relationship between different features is described clearly. Additionally, be careful with sentence structure; avoid using 'although... but' in the same sentence, as this is grammatically redundant. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure, moving from an overview to specific details. However, the cohesion is hindered by several issues. There are missing spaces after commas and periods, which disrupts the visual flow. Furthermore, the use of cohesive devices is sometimes awkward (e.g., 'Further alterments that are significant are...'). To improve, ensure consistent punctuation spacing and use a wider variety of transition signals that connect ideas more smoothly rather than just listing changes.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary attempts to be sophisticated but often results in unnatural or incorrect phrasing. Terms like 'shelter leisure providing buildings', 'offered boost to economy', and 'alterments' are not standard English and obscure the meaning. While there is an attempt to use synonyms for change, the word choices are often imprecise. Focus on learning collocations related to urban development (e.g., 'residential areas were developed', 'recreational facilities were introduced') to ensure your descriptions sound natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede communication. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'infrastructure has been demolished' when referring to plural concepts, or 'cafe and hotel have found them intacton'), tense consistency, and sentence structure. A significant error is the use of 'Although... but...', which is a double conjunction error; you should use one or the other, but not both in the same sentence. Work on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that subject-verb agreement is maintained throughout the report.

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