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Band 5+: The map illustrate an industrial in Norbit on in the present day compared with plans for the future development of the site.

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The image contains two maps illustrating an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day and plans for future development; present-day map showcases river, farmland, town, hatched factory area—future development map displays river, altered farmland shape, town, factory, new main road, roundabout, symbol-marked housing area, dashed playground.

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The maps show the transformation of an industrial area in the “Norbiton”, which will be carried out in the future.

Overall, the area become more built-up and accessible, with the introduction of new residential facilities and improved transportation networks, these changes will result in the reduction of the farmland in an area.

Firstly, it is clear that housing will be changed dramatically. There are now few factories in the area. The river even do not have a bridge to pass it today, which makes the transportation from here to the farm poor and inadequate. Also, there are circular way at the center of the area to the west of which located a town.

In the future, it is planned to build houses, which will result in the disappearance of the factories, and reduction of the farmland, although it makes the area more urbanized. Furthermore, there will be an educational, recreational, and an entertaining facilities in the area. The river will remain intact, and only will have a bridge which will be connected with a main road.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the present and future maps, and it includes an overall summary. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the report mentions a 'circular way' and a 'town' but does not clearly describe the new main road, roundabout, or the specific locations of new facilities. The statement about the river having no bridge today is not supported by the visual description. Additionally, the report could be more precise about the changes to farmland and the placement of housing. To improve, ensure all key features from the visual are covered and avoid unsupported details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. For example, 'the area become more built-up' and 'these changes will result in the reduction of the farmland in an area' could be more smoothly integrated. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some sentences feel disjointed. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic with logical progression.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'transformation', 'residential facilities', 'improved transportation networks'). However, there are inaccuracies and limited range, such as 'circular way' instead of 'roundabout', 'educational, recreational, and an entertaining facilities' (which also has a grammatical issue), and 'the river even do not have a bridge' (which is also grammatically incorrect). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and ensure correct word forms and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as subject-verb agreement ('the area become', 'river even do not have'), incorrect articles ('an industrial in Norbiton', 'an educational, recreational, and an entertaining facilities'), and awkward phrasing ('to the west of which located a town'). There is some variety in sentence structures, but control is inconsistent. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence construction. Proofreading for these common errors would significantly enhance accuracy.

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