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Band 6+: The diagrams below show a floor plan of a community centre for local people now and the proposed changes. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

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The image presents two layout diagrams titled "Current floor plan" and "Proposed floor plan", both accompanied by a north arrow pointing upward. In the "Current floor plan", the north-western section consists of "Meeting room 1", "Meeting room 2", and an "Art room" along the northern wall, with "Meeting room 3", a central "Reception", and an "Office" directly south of them, accessed via a "Main entrance" on the southern facade, and a large "Car park" occupying the entire eastern and southeastern area. In the "Proposed floor plan", "Meeting room 1", "Meeting room 2", and "Meeting room 3" remain in the northwest, while the "Art room" and "Office" are replaced by a larger "Multi-purpose room" in the northeast; the central "Reception" and relocated "Main entrance" remain, while the southern open space is converted into a "Café" and a "Gym", each with doorways opening southward into an enclosed "Garden" featuring four tree symbols, with the remaining eastern space designated as "Car park".

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The provided pictures illustrate the refurbishments anticipated to take place in the floor plan of a community centre.

Overall, all of the interior rooms remain intact, however, the current art room and the office are the exceptions. Additionally, there will be remarkable establishments of facilities.

As can be seen from the chart, there will be no modifications applied to Room 1, 2 and 3. The similarity happens to reception, whereaas the adjacent office will be removed and the space will be left vacant. Meanwhile, the nearby room, art room, will be replaced for multi-purpose room and this place will be expanded horizontally towards the car park in the east.

Look at the chart in more details, the south-west region of the car park is in the refurbishment’s project, where more facilities will be constructed. A huge green space, garden, will be built at the southwestern corner of the car park. Eventually, areas for coffee goers and gym rats will be placed to the north of the garden.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the current and proposed floor plans, and it provides an overview of the main changes. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the details. For example, it incorrectly states that the office space will be left vacant, while the proposed plan shows it replaced by a multi-purpose room. The description of the car park and the placement of the café and gym is also somewhat inaccurate. The report could benefit from more precise comparisons and a clearer structure. To improve, focus on accurately identifying all key changes and ensure that comparisons between the two plans are clear and correct.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and overview paragraph, but the flow of information is somewhat disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. For example, 'The similarity happens to reception' is vague, and 'Look at the chart in more details' is an informal instruction that breaks cohesion. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'whereaas' instead of 'whereas'). To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each sentence logically connects to the next. Paragraphing could be more skillfully managed to separate key changes and comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'refurbishments anticipated to take place', 'remarkable establishments of facilities'). However, there are several inaccuracies and informal choices that reduce precision, such as 'coffee goers and gym rats' (too informal for an academic report) and 'huge green space' (vague). The phrase 'replaced for multi-purpose room' is incorrect (should be 'replaced by'). To improve, use more formal and precise vocabulary, and avoid colloquialisms. A wider range of topic-specific terms (e.g., 'renovation', 'reconfiguration', 'amenities') would enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward structures that affect clarity. Examples include: 'whereaas' (misspelling of 'whereas'), 'the space will be left vacant' (unclear what space), 'will be replaced for' (incorrect preposition), and 'the south-west region of the car park is in the refurbishment's project' (awkward phrasing). Punctuation is mostly correct, but sentence structures are often simple or repetitive. To improve, practice using a wider range of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, conditionals) and proofread for common errors. Greater accuracy in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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