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Band 7+: The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a map detailing visitor numbers: Maritime Museum (8000 visitors each day), Aquarium (2000 visitors each day), Art Gallery (750 visitors each day), Sports Centre (500 visitors each day), Eiffel Tower (16,000 visitors each day); notable positions: Maritime Museum (location 1), Aquarium (location 2); geographical references: Right Bank, Left Bank, Bir Hakeim Bridge, Lena Bridge, Debilly Footbridge, the River Seine; transport: Bir Hakeim Metro Station; recreational areas: two parks.

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There are two possible locations which are shown on the map for opening the restaurant in Paris.

Overall, location 1 is situated on the Right Bank, near the Maritime Museum and the Aquarium, whereas Location 2 is placed on the Left Bank which has the advantages from being close to the Eiffel Tower and Art Gallery, which attract a lot of people every day.

Looking first at Location 1, it is situated on the Right Bank, positioned to the north-east of Bir Hakeim Bridge and on the left of the park, which is next to the Aquarium. The advantage of Location 1 is that the Maritime museum has 8000 visitors each day and the Aquarium attracts 2000 visitors each day, people who come to Maritime Museum and the Aquarium would choose this restaurant to purchase food while going sightseeing.

In contrast, Location 2 is located on the Left Bank, east of the Eiffel Tower and near Art Gallery. Opening the restaurant has the benefit is that there is has over 16,750 visitors each day, people could dine at this restaurant after or before going to the sport centre or simply enjoy the atmosphere and a beautiful view of the Eiffel Tower to take some photos.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

location: 5

which: 4

restaurant: 4

aquarium: 4

maritime: 3

museum: 3

eiffel: 3

tower: 3

people: 3

visitors: 3

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by describing both locations and their relative advantages. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and separate paragraphs for each location. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions: the visitor numbers for the Art Gallery and Sports Centre are not mentioned, and the total visitor count for Location 2 is incorrectly calculated (16,750 instead of 16,750? Actually, the sum of Eiffel Tower and Art Gallery is 16,750, but the report says 'over 16,750' which is slightly inaccurate as it excludes the Sports Centre). Additionally, the phrase 'has the benefit is that there is has' contains a grammatical error. To improve, ensure all data is accurately reported and proofread for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear introduction, overview, and separate paragraphs for each location. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'Looking first at', and 'In contrast' helps guide the reader. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition in the first paragraph and the slightly awkward sentence structure in the second paragraph. To improve, ensure that each paragraph flows smoothly and that the connection between ideas is explicit.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with terms like 'situated', 'positioned', 'attract', and 'dine' showing a good range. There is some repetition (e.g., 'situated' and 'located') and a few awkward phrases like 'has the advantages from being close to' and 'people could dine at this restaurant after or before going to the sport centre'. To achieve a higher score, aim for more precise and varied vocabulary, and avoid informal or imprecise expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'has the advantages from being close to' should be 'has the advantage of being close to', and 'there is has over 16,750 visitors each day' is incorrect. Additionally, there are punctuation issues, such as missing commas before relative clauses. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of prepositions, and sentence structure. Proofreading for these errors will enhance accuracy.

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