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Band 5+: The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a map detailing visitor numbers: Maritime Museum (8000 visitors each day), Aquarium (2000 visitors each day), Art Gallery (750 visitors each day), Sports Centre (500 visitors each day), Eiffel Tower (16,000 visitors each day); notable positions: Maritime Museum (location 1), Aquarium (location 2); geographical references: Right Bank, Left Bank, Bir Hakeim Bridge, Lena Bridge, Debilly Footbridge, the River Seine; transport: Bir Hakeim Metro Station; recreational areas: two parks.

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The map provides information about a company’s plans to open a new restaurant in the centre of Paris.

Overall, it can be seen that the first restraunt will be located in the north-west of the map. It will be placed close to the park in the North. The second location is planned to be constructed the East-South. It will also be close to the park which is located in the South.

To begin with, the first location which is placed in the North-West has several disadvantages. Due the reason that this cafe will be placed far from the Eiffel Tower, there are only 8000 guests per day. Another con is that there are not that many activities. There are only several places to do something like Park and Museum.

The second location will be set in the East-South. Unlike the first location, there are expected to be more than 8000 guests in this spot. The other benefits in compare, is that there are more touristic places. Because tourists go to see the tower, they might stop by this café on the way.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

there: 5

location: 4

first: 3

placed: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the two possible locations for the restaurant, but it contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the first location as 'north-west' and the second as 'East-South' is imprecise; the map shows the Maritime Museum (location 1) on the Left Bank and the Aquarium (location 2) on the Right Bank. The report mentions visitor numbers but misattributes them (e.g., 8000 visitors for the first location is correct for the Maritime Museum, but the second location's visitor numbers are not clearly stated). The report also omits key features like the Eiffel Tower's visitor numbers and transport links. To improve, focus on accurately comparing the two locations based on visitor numbers, proximity to attractions, and accessibility.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure but lacks clear progression and logical flow. Paragraphing is present but could be improved. Cohesive devices are limited and sometimes misused, making the message harder to follow. Consider using a clearer overall structure, such as introducing the map, giving an overview, and then describing each location in separate paragraphs with appropriate linking words.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but repetitive and lacks precision. Words like 'restraunt' (misspelled), 'cafe' (inconsistent), and 'guests' (should be 'visitors') show limited range. There is some attempt at paraphrasing, but more variety and accuracy are needed. Try to use a wider range of location-related vocabulary (e.g., situated, adjacent, opposite) and avoid informal terms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'Due the reason that', 'in compare', and 'the East-South'. Sentence structures are mostly simple, with limited use of complex forms. Punctuation is generally correct but could be improved. To improve, focus on using a mix of simple and complex sentences accurately, and proofread for common errors.

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