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Band 7+: The maps below show a public park in 1990 and in 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image includes two labeled layouts "Central Park, 1990" and "Central Park, 2020." In 1990: Krishna temple (top left), Flower garden (top center), Buddha statue (below flower garden), Children's play area with red slide (bottom left), Telephone booth (bottom center), Entrance (middle bottom), Shops (between entrance and koi pond), Koi pond (bottom right), Toilets (top right). In 2020: Krishna temple (top left), Flower garden (top center-left), Stage for programs (top center-right), Museum of Local History (top right), Buddha statue (below flower garden), Children's play area (bottom left), Cafe (bottom center-left), Single shop (bottom center-right), Koi pond (bottom right), Toilets (outside top right). The orientation north is indicated on the top right corner of both layouts.

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The maps illustrate a certain central park in 1990 and 2020, and what changes it has experienced.

Overall, several facilities were added, and some park features witnessed changes and replacements.

Regarding the park’s north and central side, Krishna temple remained unchanged, while flower garden along with children’s play area were shortened. Moreover, a new stage for programs was built next to the flower garden, and a new Museumof Local History was built on the toilet’s previous place. Also, the entrance was replaced on the eastern side of the park. Meanwhile, the Buddha statue in the center of the park remained untouched, while the toilet was relocated from the north-eastern corner to the south-west, taking up part of the children’s play area.Regarding the southern part of the park, the telephone booth and one shop building were erected, and a new cafe was built there; however, koi pond experienced no change on the south-eastern side of the park.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the main changes in the park between 1990 and 2020, and it makes relevant comparisons. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are a few inaccuracies and omissions: the entrance was not replaced but remained in the same location; the toilet was relocated from the top right to outside the top right, not to the south-west; and the telephone booth was removed, not erected. Additionally, the report mentions 'one shop building' but does not clarify that the shops were reduced to a single shop. To improve, ensure all key changes are accurately reported and avoid minor factual errors. The report is well-organized and covers most main features, but attention to detail would enhance task achievement.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized and easy to follow, with a clear overall statement and logical grouping of information. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Regarding' and 'Meanwhile' helps to guide the reader. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition from the northern to the southern part, and the phrase 'taking up part of the children's play area' could be more clearly linked to the previous sentence. Overall, the paragraphing is managed well, but a smoother flow between sections would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary with appropriate use of terms like 'witnessed changes', 'relocated', and 'erected'. The language is generally precise and natural. However, there are a few instances of awkward phrasing, such as 'Museumof Local History' (missing space) and 'the toilet's previous place' which could be more naturally expressed as 'the former location of the toilets'. Additionally, the phrase 'were shortened' is slightly informal; 'were reduced in size' would be more formal. Overall, the lexical resource is strong, but there is room for more sophisticated and precise word choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences with subordinate clauses, and demonstrates good control of grammar. There are a few minor errors, such as 'Museumof' (missing space) and 'the toilet's previous place' which is slightly awkward. The punctuation is generally correct, but there are a couple of run-on sentences that could be improved with better punctuation or restructuring. Overall, the grammatical range is wide and accuracy is high, with only minor lapses that do not impede understanding.

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