Band 5+: The maps below show a public park in 1990 and in 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The report addresses the task by describing the main changes in the park between 1990 and 2020, and it makes some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions that detract from the overall clarity. For instance, the report incorrectly states that the toilet swapped places with the Museum of Local History, and it mentions the entrance was replaced on the eastern side, which is not supported by the visual description. Additionally, the report omits key features such as the Buddha statue, the single shop, and the relocation of the toilets. The writing also contains numerous spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'unchaged', 'playces', 'sothern', 'experiensed') that affect readability. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main changes, ensure all key features are mentioned, and proofread for spelling and grammar. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and a body paragraph, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. For example, the phrase 'the toilet swapped playces with the Museum of Local History, which were located on the southern and northern side of the park in 2010 respectively' is confusing and contains a tense error. Additionally, the use of 'Regarding' twice in the same paragraph is repetitive. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct area or type of change. Also, use cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader through the description.

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to maps and changes (e.g., 'facilities', 'witnessed changes', 'replaced', 'erected'), but there are several spelling errors and imprecise word choices that detract from clarity. For instance, 'unchaged' should be 'unchanged', 'playces' should be 'places', 'sothern' should be 'southern', and 'bulding' should be 'building'. Also, 'shorten' is not the best choice for describing a reduction in size; 'reduced' or 'made smaller' would be more appropriate. To improve, proofread for spelling and choose more precise vocabulary to convey changes accurately.

The report attempts to use a variety of sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect accuracy. For example, 'The maps illustrates' should be 'The maps illustrate' (subject-verb agreement), and 'the toilet swapped playces with the Museum of Local History, which were located' has a subject-verb agreement issue ('which were' should be 'which was' if referring to the museum). Additionally, the tense is inconsistent ('in 2010' should be 'in 2020' based on the context). To improve, review subject-verb agreement, use consistent past tense, and ensure relative clauses are correctly formed. Also, pay attention to punctuation, such as missing commas after introductory phrases.