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Band 5+: The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The image contains two maps of Norbiton industrial area; the top map depicts the current layout featuring a river in the north, a factory in the southwest, multiple buildings primarily concentrated around a central circular road structure, and farmland in the east, whereas the bottom map illustrates the planned future development with the addition of houses replacing the factory area, a school and playground added, a more complex road layout connected to the existing circular road, and buildings spread out more evenly across the area.

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the maps shows a following different kind of plan. as an overview, the first one is showing a present environment in industrial area that happens to be filled by a bunch of factory lining on the road trails and not to mention how close it is next to the town as known as the urban city itself. while the second one depicts the future planned development for the rural community that leans towards social place followed by the sustainable life like facility such as playground, school, medical centre, and shops.

henceforth the missing amount of factories became, it seems like the main goal for this future project shows a lack of interest in workload pollution maker buildings which in my opinion as a writer, is one of the good thing a human could overcome as a social individuals that yearns for a slow living community rather than the first industrial environment.

in conclusion, both of the map shows how much time could make human decide a crucial change that are needed for the next range of lively community.

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The report attempts to address the task but contains significant issues. The summary of the maps is very general and lacks specific details. The writing style is not academic, and the language used is often vague and imprecise. The response includes some irrelevant personal opinions and does not effectively compare the main features of the two maps. To improve, focus on providing concrete details from the maps, using precise language, and maintaining an objective, academic tone. Ensure that the comparison of the maps is clear and well-supported by the visual information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas could be improved. The introduction and overview are present, but the connection between the current state and the planned development needs to be more explicit. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and paragraphing could be more effective in guiding the reader through the information. Consider using more transitional phrases to link ideas and improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice ('bunch of factory lining on the road trails') and a reliance on general terms. To improve, focus on using more specific and accurate vocabulary related to urban planning and development. Expand your range of vocabulary to describe the changes and features in the maps more effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure are present. For example, 'the maps shows' should be 'the maps show,' and the sentence structure in the second paragraph is awkward. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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