Band 6+: The maps below show changes to the layout of Riverside Park between 2010 and the present day.

The report adequately covers the main changes shown in the maps, including the addition of a cafe and playground, the expansion of the car park, the removal of trees, and the change in the path from straight to curved. The overall structure is logical, with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions: the report states that trees were removed, but the visual description indicates they were replaced by the cafe; it also mentions the car park was in the east side, but the description places it on the right (which could be east, but not specified). Additionally, the report omits the specific location of the playground (bottom-right corner) and the fact that the toilets were moved to a new position. Some grammatical errors and informal phrasing (e.g., 'builded', 'facilating', 'in to') slightly detract from clarity. To improve, ensure precise language and verify all details against the visual information.

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and minor lapses in cohesion. For example, the phrase 'the park is expanded' is used repeatedly, and the transition between paragraphs could be smoother. The use of 'To be specific' and 'Now' helps to organize the information, but the connection between ideas could be more seamless. To improve, use a wider range of cohesive devices and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'presented with', 'transformed in to'). However, there are several inaccuracies and limited range. For instance, 'builded' should be 'built', 'facilating' should be 'facilitating', and 'in to' should be 'into'. The report also uses repetitive phrases like 'the park is expanded' and 'the river remains the same'. To improve, expand your vocabulary to include more precise and varied terms, and ensure correct word forms and collocations. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, including simple and some complex sentences. However, there are several errors that affect clarity, such as 'the park is expanded' (should be 'the park has been expanded'), 'builded' (should be 'built'), and 'facilating' (should be 'facilitating'). Punctuation issues are also present, such as the missing space after 'Now ,' and the double period at the end. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct verb tenses, and proofreading for punctuation and spelling.