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Band 5+: The maps below show the layout of a coastal town called Bayview in 1990, 2010, and the proposed plan for 2030.

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The image presents three maps labeled 1990, 2010, and BAYVIEW 2030. In 1990, the map shows a Forest, two Main Roads, one Hotel, six Houses, a Harbor, and the Sea. For 2010, the map includes a Forest, a new 4-building Hotel complex north of the Main Road, a Car Park, a Souvenir Shop, a Harbor, and a Beach. The map for BAYVIEW 2030 depicts an Eco-Park, a 6-building Apartment complex, a Main Road, a Hotel, another Apartment, a Harbor, a Pedestrian Walkway, and multiple areas designated as Beach.

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The map below illustrates the layout of a coastal town named Bayview in 1990 and 2010 and the provided recommended plan for 2030.

Overall, Since 1990 til 2010 the harbor area did not change. Although from 1990 to 2030, there have been greater changes. In 2030, it is planned to replace the Forest with an Eco-park. Although the Main road is not planned to be changed.

In more details, from 1990 until 2030 the harbor region will not change but as the years goes by the size of harbor area is becoming smaller. Although, the sea zone has been displaced by the beach. Furthermore, in 1990 there was a district for main road where in 2010 it segmented into two areas of hotel and main road. However, in 2030 it will be phased out and replaced by apartments. On the other hand , in 1990 as it is shown there was a district for hotels and houses. By 2010 the hotel and houses, which were subsequently replaced by a car park and souvenir shop. Although , in 2030 it is intended that there will be districts for hotel,beach where the region will comprise three separate zones, apartment where there will be a coastal view and pedestrian walkway. The last alternation , since 1990 forest zone saw no change but in 2030 it is proposed that it will be converted into Eco-park.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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harbor: 3

change: 3

where: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main changes and developments in Bayview across the three time periods. However, there are some omissions and a lack of specific detail. To improve, focus on providing more precise descriptions and data from the maps, and ensure all key features and changes are addressed.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the transitions between ideas could be smoother. The introduction and overview are present, but the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and logical flow. The use of cohesive devices like 'although' and 'furthermore' is sometimes inappropriate or overused, leading to choppiness. Consider using a more structured approach, such as grouping changes by location or feature, and ensuring each paragraph has a clear focus. Improve the flow of ideas by using a wider range of cohesive devices and varying sentence structure.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks precision. There is some repetition of words and phrases, such as 'change' and 'replaced.' To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to urban development and spatial changes. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms for overused words and phrases. Focus on using more specific and descriptive language to convey the information accurately. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('Since 1990 til 2010 the harbor area did not change'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing ('as the years goes by the size of harbor area is becoming smaller'). Sentence structure is often simple and repetitive. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and passive voice, where appropriate. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and word order. Consider seeking feedback from a native English speaker or using grammar-checking software to identify and correct errors.

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