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The image shows two maps of a seaside village. In 2015: housing is located in the northwest, alongside a shop, hotel, and café; a forest park sits in the northeast beneath farmland; a fish market is to the south near the sea, west of a fishing port. In the present: housing remains the same; farmland is replaced by golf; the forest park is replaced by tennis courts; a restaurant replaces the shop; a car park is added adjacent to the hotel; additional apartments appear near the café; the fishing port and café remain unchanged.

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This map illustrates the development in a coastal sttlement between 2015 and current time period.

Overall, a dramatic changes are made in the east side of community, as well as, a slight renovation can be seen underneath the road. However, the west side did not alter.

With the perspective of 2015, there was a cultivated fields in the upper north east corner, a forest park situated just south of it. In addition, a road was constructed in the centre of the rural housing society, that connected them with market, shops. A hotel was made just beside the road. Whereas, shops situated above the route in the west side, while fish market and cafe just below the central road. Furthermore, a fishing harbour can be seen in the middle of the sea.

After the structural alteration in the present layout considerable transformation are made. West part of the community remains under improvements, but the farmland and the forest park are subtituated with golf and tennis game centers. Therefore, a car park is also established beside the hotel in right east direction. Similalrly, fish market is superseded by appartments, but cafe still exist there. Moreover, fishing port is diminished from the sea.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and describes the main changes, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, it incorrectly states that the fish market is replaced by apartments, whereas the description says apartments are added near the café, and the fish market is replaced by a restaurant. Also, it mentions the fishing port is diminished, but the description says it remains unchanged. The report could be improved by more accurately reflecting the changes and ensuring all key features are covered. Additionally, some language errors and awkward phrasing affect clarity, but the overall structure is logical.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'With the perspective of 2015' is awkward, and the shift from describing the 2015 map to the present map could be smoother. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Therefore' is used without a clear cause-effect relationship). To improve, use clearer paragraphing and more precise linking words to guide the reader through the changes.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'sttlement', 'subtituated', 'Similalrly', 'appartments') and some awkward word choices (e.g., 'made' instead of 'occurred', 'underneath the road' instead of 'south of the road'). To improve, use a wider variety of accurate vocabulary related to maps and changes (e.g., 'transformed', 'replaced', 'constructed', 'demolished') and ensure correct spelling.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity, including subject-verb agreement ('a dramatic changes are made'), incorrect articles ('a cultivated fields'), and inconsistent tense usage. There are also issues with punctuation and sentence structure, such as run-on sentences and missing commas. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures with accurate grammar, and proofread to eliminate basic errors.

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