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Band 4+: the pỉe chart show the sales of new cars in australia in 1984, 1993 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image comprises three pie charts detailing Australian new car sales by category for 1984, 1993, and 2013: in 1984, SUVs represent 15%, Sedans 59%, and Others 26%; in 1993, SUVs account for 21%, Sedans 55%, and Others 24%; in 2013, SUVs hold 36%, Sedans 35%, and Others 29%.

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the given pie charts illustrates that how many new cars sales in australia in three diffarent years.

overall it can be seem that, sedens sells most among suvs and others in three different years (1984,1993,2013).in addition,suvs sells experiance few growth in 1993,which is 2%.but in 2013,its back same sells like 1984

the sale on new cars in australia in 1984 sedens sales 55% ,where suvs sells 29% and others brand get 26% sells.but in 1993,sedens experienced few drop and suvs and others cars sells had some growth (which is 22% and 29%).in addition,sedens ruled the market again in sales in 2013 which is most sells in australia above three different years.furthermore,in all three years others brands cars sells haven’t seem big differance but in 1993 its get major saller and in 2014 its get minor sale.the sale on suvs get minor change in sales in 1993 but in 2013 it change same as 1984.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and some irrelevant information. The description of the data is not always precise, and there are issues with clarity and organization. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, structuring the report logically, and using precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main points and comparisons. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate different aspects of the data. To improve, focus on structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each address a specific aspect of the data (e.g., trends in sedan sales, changes in SUV sales), and a concise conclusion. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'however,' 'in contrast,' 'similarly') to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of incorrect word choice (e.g., 'sells' instead of 'sales,' 'differance' instead of 'difference'). To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to sales trends and data comparison. For example, instead of 'sells most,' you could use 'dominated the market' or 'had the highest sales figures.' Also, ensure that the vocabulary is used accurately and appropriately. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using a variety of sentence structures correctly. Pay attention to verb tenses (past, present, future) and ensure they are used consistently and accurately. Proofread carefully for errors in subject-verb agreement, punctuation, and spelling. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct errors.

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