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Band 4+: The pie chart below shows how electricity is used in an average English home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a pie chart illustrating electricity usage distribution: heating rooms/heating water accounts for 52%, ovens/kettles/washing machines represent 18%, lighting/TV/radio comprises 15%, and vacuum cleaners/food mixers/electric tools make up 15%.

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The given data displays how the electricity is consumed in average english houldhold.

Overall, most of electric used is for heating purpose, while the smaller proportion goes for entertaining and household appliances.

In detail, the heating category, which is heating rooms and water, account for 52.5% in the comsume of electricity, consuming the highest amount of electricity. Following by that is

those of cooking gadget made up for 17.5% in this sector, including ovens, kettle and washing machines

Looking at the chart for more detail, the figure for lighting, tv and radio consumed as same as that in electric tools, such as vacuum cleaners, food mixers and the others at 15%

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electricity: 3

heating: 3

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Task Response

The report successfully identifies the main features and provides an overall summary. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., 52.5% instead of 52%, 17.5% instead of 18%) and minor omissions (e.g., not explicitly comparing the two 15% categories). The structure is generally clear, but the writing contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'average english houldhold', 'most of electric used', 'Following by that is'). To improve, focus on accurate data representation, correct grammar, and smoother transitions between ideas. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction, an overview, and a body paragraph, but the flow is disrupted by several issues. The overview is present but could be clearer. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Following by that is those of...'). Paragraphing is not effectively managed, as the body is presented as a single block of text. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and phrases (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'regarding') and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct set of features or comparisons. Organize the information more logically, perhaps by grouping related categories.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task but lacks range and precision. There are some errors in word choice and spelling (e.g., 'english houldhold' for 'English home', 'comsume' for 'consumption', 'gadget' for 'appliances'). The phrasing is sometimes awkward (e.g., 'consumed as same as that in electric tools'). To improve, expand your vocabulary with topic-specific terms (e.g., 'domestic electricity consumption', 'proportion', 'category', 'appliance') and use more precise language. Avoid informal or incorrect terms and ensure correct spelling.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Issues include incorrect article usage ('the electricity is consumed'), subject-verb agreement ('account for' should be 'accounts for'), missing prepositions, and sentence fragments (e.g., 'Following by that is those of cooking gadget made up for 17.5%...'). Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, focus on basic sentence structure, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use a variety of sentence types (simple, compound, complex). Proofread carefully to eliminate errors. Practicing writing with correct grammar and punctuation will help raise the score.

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