Band 4+: The pie chart below shows the breakdown of monthly household expenditure in a particular city. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The report addresses the task by presenting the main features of the pie chart and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and awkward phrasings that detract from clarity. For instance, the statement 'Transportation came next, with its share represented as 15% each' is unclear and contains an error ('each' is unnecessary). Additionally, the phrase 'Rent had majority share as 35% more than quarter of the total' is confusing and imprecise. The report also contains spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'Thr', 'breakdowm', 'similiar', 'Furthemore', 'ans'). To improve, focus on using clear, accurate language, avoid informal or incorrect expressions, and ensure each sentence is grammatically correct. While the overall structure is logical, refining the language and correcting minor inaccuracies would enhance the response. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. The overview is present but could be more clearly stated. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'As for rent , food and transportation , they were most popular expenses' is wordy and unclear). Paragraphing is attempted but not consistently effective. To improve, use clearer topic sentences, ensure each paragraph has a central idea, and use a range of linking words accurately (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'overall').

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'distribution', 'accounting for', 'share', 'proportion'), but there are several inaccuracies and limited range. Words like 'hefty', 'majority share', 'breakdowm' (misspelling), 'similiar' (misspelling), and 'minority smallest share' are awkward or incorrect. The phrasing 'more than quarter of the total' is imprecise. To improve, expand your range of synonyms for 'percentage' and 'proportion', use precise quantifiers (e.g., 'just over a quarter', 'exactly one-tenth'), and avoid informal or vague expressions. Proofread for spelling errors.

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement ('rent make up' should be 'rent makes up'), missing articles ('the smallest proportion' is used but later 'other' is used without article), incorrect pluralization ('expenses' vs 'expense'), and run-on sentences. There are also punctuation errors, such as missing spaces after commas and periods. The range of grammatical structures is limited, with mostly simple sentences. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, passive voice) and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles. Carefully proofread for punctuation and spelling.