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Band 4+: The pie charts below show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010

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The image contains two pie charts illustrating the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France for the years 1990 and 2010. In 1990: coal 27%, oil 17%, natural gas 15%, hydro power 20%, nuclear power 35%. In 2010: coal 13%, oil 13%, natural gas 10%, hydro power 20%, nuclear power 67%.

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The two pie Charts compare that electricity generated by five different fuel resources in France during the years 1990 and 2010.

Overall, the electricity were more produced by Coal and Natural gas. while other resources were generated electricity are very low.

In 1990, the source of fuel include natural gas and coal generated electricity are increased substantially accounted for 28% each. In case of oil, production of electricity is slightly decreased as compare to natural gas and oil. While that of these three resources contributed more than three quarter. Hydro power and nuclear power were declined slightly with 6% and 17%, respectively.

By 2010, the electricity generated by nuclear power about 67 percent, it was more 50% as compared to 1990. In contrast, coal and oil are accounted for 13% each. It was go down from 1990 approximately 15%. Finally, natural gas and hydro power were greatly decreased with 4% and 2% respectively. It was more least according to the previous pie charts in 1990.

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electricity: 6

generated: 4

natural: 4

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is not clearly identified, and some data is misreported (e.g., coal and natural gas at 28% each in 1990, hydro and nuclear declining). The structure is somewhat disorganized, and the language is often unclear or grammatically incorrect, which detracts from the clarity of the response. To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main trends, using precise data, and organizing the information logically with clear comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for each year. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'it was more 50%' and 'It was more least'). The overview is present but could be more precise and better integrated. Paragraphing is acceptable, but the logical progression within paragraphs could be improved for smoother readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some appropriate terms like 'accounted for' and 'contributed'. However, there are several inaccuracies and awkward choices (e.g., 'fuel resources', 'generated electricity are increased substantially', 'more least'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition. To improve, use more precise and varied language, such as 'fuel sources', 'witnessed a significant increase', and 'the smallest proportion'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement ('the electricity were more produced'), incorrect verb forms ('are generated electricity'), and awkward sentence structures. There is also inconsistent use of tenses and articles. To improve, focus on sentence construction, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for punctuation. Using a wider range of complex structures accurately would also enhance the score.

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