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Band 5+: The pie chart below shows the breakdown of revenue streams for an average international football team. The table shows the age distribution of football fans attending the matchs of three teams. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image contains a pie chart and a table. The pie chart has six categories: Broadcasting Rights 52%, Match Day Revenue 15%, Sponsorship 8%, Merchandise 5%, Transfers 12%, Prize Money 8%. The table lists three countries with four age categories. For Ukraine: Under 20 is 5%, 20-40 is 15%, 40-60 is 40%, 60+ is 40%. For Ethiopia: Under 20 is 5%, 20-40 is 15%, 40-60 is 30%, 60+ is 50%. For Argentina: Under 20 is 10%, 20-40 is 35%, 40-60 is 25%, 60+ is 30%.

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The chart illustrates the breakdown of revenue channels for a typical international football team. The table depicts the age distribution of sport fans visiting the matches in 3 football teams. Overall, the highest revenue margins can be observed in broadcasting rights and match day revenue, while the average age of football fans ranges from 20-40 in Argentina to over 60 in Ethiopia.

As for a pie chart, the major amount of money is collected from broadcasting rights and match day revenue, resulting in 52 and 15 percent, respectively. The lowest percentage of 5% is accounted for sponsorship.

As for the table, the highest amount of fans in all three teams is over 60 years old, and the percentage ranges from 30 in Argentina to 50 in Ethiopia. The lowest percentage is observed for fans under 20, with only 5% in Ukraine and Ethiopia and 10% in Argentina. It can be concluded that the highest numbers of revenue streams are collected from people over 60 years old.

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revenue: 5

football: 3

highest: 3

argentina: 3

percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by describing both the pie chart and the table. However, there are some inaccuracies in data interpretation and logical connections. For instance, the report incorrectly identifies sponsorship as the lowest percentage (it is actually merchandise at 5%), and it makes an unsupported logical leap in the conclusion by suggesting that revenue streams are collected from fans over 60, whereas the table only provides data on fan age distribution, not their spending habits. To improve, ensure that comparisons between the two different data sets (revenue vs. age) are not conflated, and double-check that the specific figures cited match the visual data provided.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the cohesion is somewhat mechanical, relying heavily on repetitive transition phrases like 'As for...'. There is also a significant logical error in the final sentence where the writer attempts to draw a connection between the revenue streams (pie chart) and the age of fans (table) that is not supported by the data. Avoid making unsupported correlations between two different datasets unless the prompt explicitly links them.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is functional but limited. There are some inaccuracies in word choice, such as using 'revenue margins' (which refers to profit ratios) instead of 'revenue sources' or 'shares', and 'amount of fans' (fans should be treated as a countable noun, so 'number of fans' is correct). To improve, try to use a wider variety of synonyms for 'show', 'highest', and 'lowest', and ensure that the terms used are mathematically appropriate for the context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are frequent errors that affect clarity. For example, 'the highest amount of fans... is over 60 years old' is grammatically awkward; it should be 'the largest proportion of fans... are aged over 60'. Additionally, there are issues with preposition usage and article placement. Focus on subject-verb agreement and the correct use of countable versus uncountable nouns to improve accuracy.

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