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Band 6+: The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image presents pie and bar charts. For persons arrested in five years ending 1994, males: arrested 32%, not arrested 68%; females: arrested 9%, not arrested 91%. The reasons for the most recent arrest are detailed as follows: drink driving, males roughly 16%, females about 7%; public drinking, males about 10%, females about 7%; breach of order, males approximately 9.5%, females around 6%; assault, males nearly 10.5%, females about 7.5%; theft, males about 7.5%, females about 7%; other reasons, males about 7.5%, females close to 10%; no answer, males about 38%, females around 55%.

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The pie chart depicts how many people were detained over 5-year period from 1989 to 1994, while the bar chart illustrates the latest cause of arrestment.

Overall, it can be seen that the majority of arrestees are men, and the main reason for both male and female detention was public drinking.

Looking at the first chart in more detail, it is clear that over the 5-year period ending in 1994, men accounted for arrest, compared to only 9% of women.

According to the bar chart, the main reason for both genders to be arrested was public drinking, exceeding 30% of all detainment. The second dominant cause of arrest for males was drink driving, whereas for women it was almost twice as low. Regarding the less common factors of apprehension, theft and assault were the least spread among females, without going beyond approximately 13%. For males, however, breach of order and other reasons showed relatively similar moderate patterns from 15% to 20% The no answer category comprised a very small percentage of respondents, at around 5%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The report identifies some key features of the charts but contains inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The overall structure is present, but the details provided are not always accurate or well-supported by the data. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the charts and avoid misinterpreting the percentages. Ensure that comparisons are based on the actual data and are not overstated or misleading.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a generally clear overview of the data. However, the organization could be improved for better flow. The second paragraph is a bit confusing as it mentions public drinking as the main reason for arrest, which contradicts the data in the bar chart where 'no answer' is the largest category. Try to ensure that your overall statements accurately reflect the most significant trends in the data. Also, the final sentence abruptly mentions a small percentage of respondents, which feels disconnected from the preceding discussion. Consider rephrasing and integrating this information more smoothly into the paragraph.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a satisfactory range of vocabulary, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language to describe the data. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'arrest' or 'detention,' consider synonyms like 'apprehension,' 'incarceration,' or 'custody' to add nuance. Also, be careful about using informal language like 'without going beyond approximately 13%'. Strive for more formal and academic phrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'men accounted for arrest' is grammatically incorrect and should be rephrased (e.g., 'men accounted for 32% of arrests'). Also, the statement about public drinking exceeding 30% of all detainment is inaccurate based on the provided data. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate representation of the data to improve grammatical accuracy.

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