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Band 5+: The pie chart shows the proportion of adults who were overweight, obese or severely obese in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a pie chart where 29% of the adult population in 2015 was healthy or underweight, 31% was overweight, and 34% was obese (too fat), while 6% is categorized in a section not labeled directly.

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The pie chart gives information about the adult population according to the weight range in 2015.

Overall, it can be seen that adults who were obese had the greatest percentage in that year along with, overweight people which was the second highest proportion.

In 2015, adult people who were healthy or underweight was 29% which was the third lowest among all the weight range. Meanwhile, 31% of adults were overweight in that year.

Adults who were too fat had the highest proportion which was 34% which was just over 3% that of overweight people. The lowest proportion was 6%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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overweight: 3

people: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by presenting the main features of the pie chart and making some comparisons. It correctly identifies the highest proportion (obese) and the second highest (overweight), and includes the healthy/underweight and the unlabeled category. However, there are a few minor lapses: the phrase 'third lowest' is awkward and slightly inaccurate (since there are only four categories, it would be clearer to say 'second lowest' or simply '29%'), and the comparison 'just over 3% that of overweight people' is unclear and could be better expressed as '3 percentage points higher than overweight.' Additionally, the report could be more concise and avoid repetition. Overall, the response covers the requirements sufficiently with minor omissions and lapses. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear overall statement followed by specific details. However, the flow could be improved by grouping related data more effectively and using a wider range of cohesive devices. For instance, the final sentence introducing the lowest proportion feels abrupt and could be better linked to the preceding information. Consider using more varied linking words and phrases to enhance the smooth progression of ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with terms like 'proportion', 'overweight', and 'obese' correctly applied. However, there is limited range and some repetition (e.g., 'adults' and 'proportion' are used multiple times). To improve, incorporate synonyms and more precise language, such as 'percentage', 'segment', 'category', or 'accounted for'. Additionally, avoid informal phrasing like 'too fat' and use more formal alternatives like 'obese' or 'clinically obese'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, but there are a few minor errors and awkward phrasings. For example, 'adult people' should be 'adults', and 'was 29%' should be 'accounted for 29%' or 'stood at 29%'. The sentence 'which was just over 3% that of overweight people' is unclear and should be rephrased, e.g., 'which was just over 3 percentage points higher than the overweight category'. Overall, the grammar is mostly accurate, but refining these points would improve clarity and precision.

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