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Band 6+: The pie chart shows women in poverty in the United States and bar chart compares poverty rates by gender.

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The image presents a pie chart and bar chart; the pie chart illustrates women in poverty by family composition with 54% being single women with dependent children, 26% married women with dependent children, 12% single women without dependent children, and 8% married women without dependent children; the bar chart displays poverty rates by age and gender, showing for under 5 years: women 21%, men 22%; ages 5-17: women 19%, men 18%; ages 18-24: women 18%, men 13%; ages 25-34: women 16%, men 9%; ages 35-44: women 14%, men 9%; ages 45-54: women 12%, men 8%; ages 55-64: women 11%, men 7%; ages 65-74: women 11%, men 6%; ages 75 and older: women 15%, men 9%.

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The pie chart compares women of different composition of household on poverty, while the bar chart shows the poverty rates by gender and age in the United States.

It is visible that, women who are not married are in a more state of poverty than the ones who are, furthermore, women with no dependent kids are the least poor compared to the rest. Men and women of all ages tend to be at same same poverty levels throughout their lives with a slight difference in women each year.

Looking at the chart, it can be seen that the highest poverty rates in the US are single women with no children making up 54% of all women in poverty. In addition, the number of single women with kids is almost two times less with 26%. It is obvious that, married women with and without dependent children are the least poor at 12% and 8%.

There are considerable differences when comparing men’s and women’s poverty rates of various ages. Both of them are beginning to be more financially responsible at their 20s and 30s, although women are in a slightly more rate of poverty no matter the age. Men with the lowest poverty rates in the United States are often older than 65 as presented in the chart, while for women, that number is from 45 to 60.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing both charts, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, it incorrectly states that single women without children have the highest poverty rate (54%), whereas the data shows that single women with dependent children have the highest rate. Additionally, the report omits specific age groups and some data points. The overall structure is clear, but the content could be more accurate and comprehensive.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'It is visible that' is informal, and the overview could be more clearly separated from the details. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some sentences are long and convoluted, making the message harder to follow. To improve, use clearer paragraphing, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea, and employ a wider range of linking words and phrases to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to the task, such as 'poverty rates', 'dependent children', and 'composition of household'. However, there are instances of awkward phrasing and word choice, such as 'in a more state of poverty' and 'the least poor', which are not natural. The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of certain terms. To improve, expand your lexical range by using synonyms and more precise terms, and ensure that phrases are idiomatic and natural. For example, instead of 'the least poor', use 'the lowest poverty rates'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are several errors that affect clarity. For instance, 'women of different composition of household' should be 'women of different household compositions', and 'at same same poverty levels' contains a repetition error. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. The report would benefit from more complex sentence structures and careful proofreading to eliminate these errors. Pay attention to punctuation and ensure that each sentence is grammatically complete.

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