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Band 4+: The pie charts below illustrate the age distribution of the populations of Brazil and Germany in 2000 and projections for the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows demographic data with pie charts for Brazil and Germany from years 2000 and 2050. In 2000, Brazil's population consists of 5% seniors, 30% youth, and 65% adults; by 2050, the figures shift to 13% seniors, 17% youth, and 70% adults. For Germany in 2000, 22% are seniors, 14% youth, and 65% adults; by 2050, seniors constitute 40%, youth 12%, and adults 48%.

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The rendered complex chart of the pie exemplifies age distribution between adults, seniors, and youth in two countries Brazil and Germany from 2000 and projection for the yera of 2050.

overall, it can be seemed that in Brazil from 2000 to 2050 age ranking increased in adults and youths but in senior population level are decrease. However, in Germany age ranking of seniors are increase but in youth and adults’ population decrease. eventually there is a fluctuation in the population level in these two countries.

According to the complex structure of the pie chart in Brazil Adults ranking is increased 65 to 70 % (5 percent) and proption of Senior people rise 8 percent from 2000 to 2050 but in Youth level of population are decrease from 30 % to 17 %. Moreover, in Germany individuals of seniors are dramatically surge around 50 % for instance in 2000 it is 22% but in 2050 increase into 40%. But youth ranking dip 1% and population level in adults also decreased from 65% to 48%.

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