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The image presents three pie charts delineating global Internet users' favorite social media platforms across 2011, 2012, and 2013. In 2011, Facebook captures 41%, Twitter 21%, LinkedIn 10%, Google+ 5%, and Pinterest 23%. For 2012, Facebook dominates with 49%, Twitter shares 21%, LinkedIn retains 5%, Google+ rises to 10%, Pinterest drops to 15%. Moving to 2013, Facebook leads at 45%, Twitter shrinks to 16%, LinkedIn maintains 5%, Google+ steadies at 10%, and Pinterest increases to 25%.

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The given pie chart illustrates worldwide internet favorite social media channel between 2001 and 2012. Overall, Facebook stayed the most popular social media site during all the years, however its share slowly went down. At the same time, other apps like Twitter, Linkeden, Google, Pinterest Became popular.

In 2011, Facaboon’s share was 69%, while others had only 20,10,5%. By 2012 the percentage of Facebook had decreased slightly to 49%. Moreover, Twitter rose to 23%, Linkedin to 12%, Google and Pinterest also growth to 10% and 69%.

In 2013, Facebook continued its decline, although it remained in the trend. Twitter grew to 25%. and Linkedin reached 15%. Google ane Pinterest also rose slightly to 14% and 8%.

Finally, Facaboon was the most popular social media platform in all three years, but its popular decreased over time. The other platforms became more popular. HGJKVH FGBFHF HFH FHF JHJKHKJ JKHJK HJKH HJKHKL KLJHHL JGHK

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popular: 4

social: 3

media: 3

facebook: 3

twitter: 3

google: 3

pinterest: 3

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Task Response

The report demonstrates an attempt to address the task, but it contains significant inaccuracies and irrelevant information. The data presented does not align with the provided pie charts, and there are instances of invented or misinterpreted figures. The writing also suffers from errors in spelling and grammar, which impede clarity. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the pie charts, ensuring that all figures cited are correct and properly attributed. Additionally, work on improving grammar and spelling to enhance the overall coherence and clarity of the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is not presented in a coherent manner, and the transitions between years and platforms are abrupt. Paragraphing is not effectively used to group related information. The inclusion of irrelevant text at the end significantly detracts from the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, with limited range and flexibility. There are instances of misspelling ('Facaboon', 'Linkeden') and inappropriate word choice ('apps', 'growth'). The report does not demonstrate a sophisticated control of lexical features. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('stayed', 'Became'), subject-verb agreement issues, and inaccurate use of prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear, hindering comprehension. Punctuation is also used inconsistently and incorrectly.

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