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Band 5+: The pie charts below show the different types of metals exported by the US and UK in 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts above show the proportions of different types of metals that exported by the UK and US in the year 2020.

Overall, the aluminium and iron were the most metals that the US exported in the year 2020, with a slight difference with the UK, which the aluminium followed by copper.

Aluminium and iron recorded more than half of the metals that the US exported in 2020, recording 30% and 27% respectively, followed by copper at 18%, and other metals at 15%, while only 10% was zinc proportion in this year.

Alimunium was the highest metal sold in the UK as it clacified in the US, but with a small extra quantity compared to the US, which recorded 32%, and the second level recorded by copper sales at 24%, while iron delined to the third place at 19%; and remained types of metal accounted the same proportion as what they recorded in the US.

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by identifying the key metals and providing a comparison between the two countries. An overview is present, which is essential for a good score. However, there are several areas for improvement. Some phrasing is awkward or grammatically incorrect (e.g., 'the most metals that the US exported', 'as it clacified in the US'), which occasionally obscures meaning. Additionally, while the data is mostly accurate, the organization of comparisons could be smoother. To improve, focus on using more precise comparative structures and ensuring that sentence construction is clear and grammatically sound.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat logical, but the progression is hindered by awkward phrasing and sentence structures. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some sentences are overly long and convoluted, making it difficult for the reader to follow the comparisons between the two countries. To improve, try to use clearer transition words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly', 'Regarding') and break down long, complex sentences into smaller, more manageable ones to ensure a smooth flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat repetitive and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'Alimunium', 'clacified', 'delined'). There is also an attempt to use more sophisticated phrasing, but it often results in unnatural word combinations (e.g., 'the most metals', 'the second level recorded by'). To improve, focus on learning precise collocations related to data description (e.g., 'accounted for', 'constituted', 'represented') and ensure that spelling is accurate to maintain a professional tone.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede communication. There are issues with passive voice construction (e.g., 'metals that exported'), subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure (e.g., 'which the aluminium followed by copper'). The use of relative clauses is often incorrect. To improve, practice using complex sentence structures more accurately, particularly relative clauses and passive voice, and pay close attention to sentence boundaries to avoid run-on sentences.

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Band 5+: The pie charts below show the different types of metals exported by the US and UK in 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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