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Band 4+: The pie charts below show the frequency of snacking in children while playing electronic games. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two pie charts labeled as "Devices used to watch Entertainment Programmes in Malaysia" for the years 2009 and 2019, focusing on individuals aged 18 to 24. In 2009, distribution is as follows: Mobile phone at 15%, Laptop at 20%, Tablet at 5%, Conventional TV at 55%, Desktop computer at 8%, and Flat-screen TV at 18%. In 2019, distribution is as follows: Mobile phone at 26%, Laptop at 12%, Tablet at 19%, Conventional TV at 12%, Desktop computer at 27%, and Flat-screen TV at 4%.

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The Pie Chart Illustrates how often kids snacking while playing modern games

Overall in a decade there was a differences electronic gadgets usage. There was 6 gadgets that highly used for watch some Entertaiment and the most striking features Conventional Tv at the beginning and end at Mobile phones that used for watching entertaiment.

Pie chart present more than a third use Conventional TV to enjoyed their entertaiment while the rest stay under afifth. But there was an increased for mobile phone about times 3 from the start of it. However the usage of Conventional Tv decreasing a third from the beginning. Tablet became number 3 for increasing about 15 percent as it started. In addition that the other gadget there was up and down but the rest show an uptrend and the were a high differences over a decade. From their people take the flexible gadget more than the conventional gadget and hard to carry with so they can enjoy their entertaiment everywhere they want to.

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The response attempts to address the task but includes some inaccuracies and irrelevant information, such as mentioning 'kids snacking while playing modern games' when the charts actually depict device usage for entertainment among young adults. The description of trends is also not entirely clear or accurate. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the pie charts and clearly describing the significant changes between 2009 and 2019. Ensure that the comparisons are precise and relevant to the data presented.

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The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main points and comparisons. Paragraphing is weak, and transitions between sentences and ideas are missing. To improve, focus on structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each address a specific aspect of the data, and a conclusion. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

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The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of incorrect word choice and imprecise language. To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to describing data, trends, and comparisons. Focus on using synonyms and paraphrasing to avoid repetition. Ensure that the vocabulary used is appropriate for the context and accurately reflects the information in the charts.

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