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Band 6+: The pie charts below show the percentage of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

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The image consists of three pie charts representing percentages for five categories across three years: "Adult fiction," "Children's fiction," "Biography," "Travel," "Others." In 1972, the breakdown is 20% "Adult fiction," 25% "Children's fiction," 15% "Biography," 20% "Travel," 20% "Others." In 1992, the distribution is 25% "Adult fiction," 20% "Children's fiction," 18% "Biography," 22% "Travel," 15% "Others." In 2012, the segmentation is 45% "Adult fiction," 25% "Children's fiction," 10% "Biography," 8% "Travel," 12% "Others."

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The pie charts compare five different genres of books purchased in a bookstore from 1972 to 2012 measured in percentages.

Overall, it is visible that travel, biography and various other types of books experienced a decline, whilst the opposite was true for those of adult and children’s fiction.

Looking at the data acquired in 1972, other books were the most popular section with their rate accounting for 25%, which was higher than biography, adult fiction and children’s fiction by 5%. Travel books, with the figure of 15%, were the least viral section.

Turning to the information received in 1992, adult fiction was the highest figure accounting for 25%, being bigger than children’s fiction by 3%. Followed by them, travel reached its peak at 18%, which was lower than the rate of other books by 2%, and higher than biography by 3%.

Regarding the data given in 2012, adult and children’s fiction showed the best rate with the former accounting for 45%, and the latter 20% lower. Other types of books faced a significant level off by 8%, finishing the period with 12%, being higher than travel books by 2%, and biography by 4%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

books: 7

fiction: 5

travel: 4

biography: 4

other: 4

adult: 4

children's: 4

accounting: 3

higher: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task, presenting the main trends and changes in book sales across the specified years. The organization is clear, with an overview followed by detailed descriptions of each year. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported, and the language could be more precise. To improve, ensure data accuracy and vary sentence structures for a more sophisticated presentation.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping the information by category (e.g., adult fiction, children's fiction) across the years to highlight trends more effectively. The transitions between paragraphs are adequate but could be smoother. For example, instead of simply 'Turning to the information received in 1992,' try a more descriptive transition that links back to the previous paragraph or introduces the new time period in relation to the overall trend.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are opportunities to use more precise and sophisticated language. For instance, instead of 'most popular section,' consider 'the largest proportion' or 'the most significant category.' Varying your vocabulary will enhance the overall quality of the report. Also, avoid informal language such as 'viral section'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct use of prepositions, and accurate sentence structure. For example, 'other books were the most popular section with their rate accounting for 25%' could be rephrased for better accuracy and clarity. Proofread carefully to identify and correct these errors.

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