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Band 6+: The pie charts show how adults in one country spent a typical weekday in 2000 and 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two pie charts labeled 2000 and 2025, accompanied by a legend containing five categories: Sleep, Work / study, Screen leisure, Housework, and Other leisure & family. In the 2000 pie chart, the proportions are: Sleep at 33%, Work / study at 35%, Screen leisure at 8%, Housework at 14%, and Other leisure & family at 10%. In the 2025 pie chart, the proportions are: Sleep at 28%, Work / study at 37%, Screen leisure at 16%, Housework at 10%, and Other leisure & family at 8%.

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The two pie charts give information about how adults spent standart weekday between 2000 and 2025.

Overall, it is clear that adults who spent their weekday by working and studying dominated in both periods. Additionally, adults who were sleeping was the second largest category through the period. Two categories faced an upward trend, while others had downward.

When it comes to 2000, the proportion of worked and studied adults made up 35%, which was more for 3% than that of adults who slept that was 33%. Other categories were under 14%. Adults who spent their time through screen leisure and other activities made up 8% and 10%, which was less than housework that accounted for 14%.

In 2025, there were several upward trends, including adults who worked and studied rose slightly for 2%, from 35% to 37%; additionally, Also adults who spent time on screen activities doubled, achieving 16%. In contrast, other three categories declined with small differences, adults who slept fall from 33% to 28%, housework from 14% to 10%. Finally, the figure for other activities decreased with 2% difference, from 10% to 8%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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adults: 9

spent: 4

other: 4

categories: 3

activities: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by presenting an overview and describing the main trends in the data. The overall structure is logical, with a clear introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some grammatical and lexical inaccuracies (e.g., 'standart', 'adults who were sleeping was', 'fall from' instead of 'fell from') and a few awkward phrasings that slightly affect clarity. To improve, focus on grammatical accuracy and use more precise vocabulary. Additionally, ensure that the overview clearly highlights the most significant changes, such as the doubling of screen leisure, which is mentioned but could be emphasized more strongly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'which was more for 3% than that of adults who slept that was 33%'). The use of cohesive devices is sometimes repetitive or inaccurate (e.g., 'Additionally, Also'). Paragraphing is logical, but the second body paragraph could be better organized to group similar trends. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'proportion', 'accounted for', 'upward trend', 'declined'). However, there are several instances of imprecise or unnatural word choices (e.g., 'standart weekday', 'spent their weekday by working', 'the proportion of worked and studied adults'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is some repetition. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'typical weekday', 'engaged in', 'experienced a rise', and 'saw a decrease'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors that affect clarity, including subject-verb agreement ('adults who were sleeping was'), incorrect verb forms ('spent standart weekday'), and awkward phrasing ('which was more for 3% than'). There are also punctuation issues and some sentences are difficult to follow. While there is some attempt to use a range of structures, the frequent errors prevent full control. To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and using correct prepositions and articles. Proofreading for these common errors would significantly enhance accuracy.

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