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Band 7+: The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents two pie charts detailing survey results on children's cultural and leisure activities; the boys' chart shows 26% basketball, 17% soccer, 22% reading, 10% listening to music, 16% computer games, and 11% skateboarding; the girls' chart shows 21% reading, 15% listening to music, 10% computer games, 15% netball, 12% gymnastics, and 27% dancing.

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The provided pie charts illustrate the results of a survey of separate activities of boys and girls. Overall, while in the pie chart of boys, computer games make up the largest percentage of all figures, the figure for dancing is the largest in the remaining pie chart.

In the boys’ chart, among all figures, computer games ranks first, at 34%, which is around 10 percentage points higher than the figure for basketball. Far below are soccer, listening to music, and skateboarding, with these figures being 17%, 10%, and 11% respectively. The figure for reading makes up a small proportion, standing at only 2%.

In another chart, the figure for dancing holds first place at around a quarter. Close below is reading, standing at 21%. Meanwhile, the figures for computer games, netball, gymnastics, and listening to music fluctuate between 10% and 16% for each category.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

figures: 4

figure: 4

chart: 3

computer: 3

games: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall comparison, but it contains several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., computer games at 34% instead of 16%, reading at 2% instead of 22%, and missing the 15% for listening to music in the girls' chart). These inaccuracies detract from the task achievement. To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately reported and that the main features are clearly highlighted with correct figures. Additionally, make more explicit comparisons between the two charts, such as noting that reading is more popular among girls than boys, and that boys prefer sports like basketball and soccer while girls prefer dancing and netball. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with clear paragraphing for each chart and an overall summary. The flow is logical and easy to follow. Minor improvements could be made by using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs, but overall cohesion is strong.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and generally accurate, with some good use of synonyms (e.g., 'ranks first', 'holds first place', 'fluctuate'). However, there is room for more sophisticated and varied lexical choices, and some phrases are slightly repetitive (e.g., 'the figure for'). Expanding the range of vocabulary would enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is accurate with a good range of sentence structures, including complex sentences. Punctuation is used correctly. There are no significant errors, and the report demonstrates strong grammatical control. To reach a higher band, the writer could incorporate even more varied structures, but the current level is very good.

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