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The image shows two plans of Porth Harbour, one from 2000 and one from today; in 2000, the harbour included a car park, fishing market, toilets, road, path, public parking, dock, marine office, fishing boats, sailboats, lifeboat, passenger terminal, Hotel (Café); in the today plan, the marine office and passenger terminal remain while new additions include sailing club replacing showers, new restaurants replacing fishing market and public parking, fishing market gains adjacent cafe & shops area, sailboats and fishing boats area revamped with a new area allocated for leisure fishing, castle remains unchanged.

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The maps illustrate the changes that have taken place in Port Harbour since 2000. Overall, the infrastructure has been developed, with a particular focus on tourism.

In the northern part, the quantity of dockes has risen from two to three to be able to get more boats, while the access to public beach and the area with showers and toilets and the access to car park have stayed the same.

As for the southern part of the harbour, a new block with toilets and showers has been added next to the car park, which had a road from the main road in 2000, but now it he an access from the road that goes to the lifeboat station. A new hotel with its own private beach has appeared instead of a castle. Moreover, cafes and shops have been built right next to the the sea, while the marina for private yahts has changed place with the marina for fishing boats.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main changes in the harbour, but it contains some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, it mentions a new hotel replacing a castle, which is not supported by the visual description, and it omits key changes such as the new sailing club, restaurants, and the leisure fishing area. The overall structure is clear, but the report could be improved by ensuring all main features are covered and by avoiding unsupported details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with an introduction, an overall statement, and paragraphs for the northern and southern parts. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear references (e.g., 'it he an access' and 'the marina for private yahts has changed place with the marina for fishing boats') and a few awkward phrasings. The paragraphing is adequate, but the connection between ideas could be smoother. To improve, use clearer referencing and transition words to guide the reader through the changes.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'infrastructure has been developed', 'a particular focus on tourism'). However, there are some inaccuracies and limited range: 'dockes' should be 'docks', 'yahts' should be 'yachts', and 'changed place' is informal. The report could benefit from more precise and varied vocabulary to describe changes (e.g., 'relocated', 'converted', 'expanded'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as 'it he an access' (should be 'it has access'), 'the quantity of dockes has risen' (should be 'the number of docks has increased'), and 'a new block with toilets and showers has been added next to the car park, which had a road from the main road in 2000' (ambiguous relative clause). There is also a missing article before 'castle' and inconsistent tense usage. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and clearer sentence structures.

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