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Band 6+: The plans below show a college cafe before it was redesigned and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents two café floor plans. The first, 'Café before redesign', contains a Kitchen, a Serving area for all food & drink, a section for Tables and chairs, Toilets, a Bin, and two Staff dining rooms, each with 1 round table and 5 chairs for a total of 10 chairs. The second plan, 'Café today', features a Kitchen, separate areas for Hot meals, Salad bar, Take away food, and a Coffee bar, a main Tables and chairs area, Toilets, and Recycling bins. This design adds a Barbecue and Outdoor seating area with 4 tables: one with 2 chairs, one with 4 chairs, and two with 6 chairs each, totaling 18 outdoor seats.

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The diagram depicts the transformation of a college cafe before and after its redevelopment.

Overall, the area underwent substantial transformation, with the most noticeable changes involving outdoor seating. While several new facilities were introduced and existing structures were redeveloped, some features remained largely untouched.

Turning to the northern section, before redevelopment, kitchen was located adjacent to the serving area where all food and drinks are sold. After transformation, the serving area has been replaced by hot meals. Furthermore, in the center of the layout, considerable reconstruction took place. Before redesign, there were staff dining rooms in the main area, with a bin and toilets in the east section. However, the staff dining area was demolished and bin was converted into recycling bins, while toilets continued to occupy the same location. Additionally, a salad bar is added in the western side.

Regarding the southern side, further modifications have occurred. An outdoor seating area has been introduced, with a barbecue area and five additional seats.

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Task Response

The report effectively identifies the main changes and provides a clear overview of the transformation. It successfully compares the 'before' and 'after' states. To improve, ensure more precise data reporting; for example, the report mentions 'five additional seats' in the outdoor area, whereas the visual description indicates a much larger capacity. Additionally, more specific details regarding the new food service divisions (such as the coffee bar or takeaway area) would strengthen the description of the central layout.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized, using a clear structure to compare the 'before' and 'after' states. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'Turning to', 'Furthermore', and 'Regarding' helps guide the reader through the spatial changes. However, some transitions between sentences could be smoother to ensure the flow is effortless. To improve, try to use more varied linking phrases that connect the ideas of change (e.g., 'In place of the former...', 'This was superseded by...') rather than just listing changes sequentially.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with good use of words like 'transformation', 'redevelopment', 'demolished', and 'reconstruction'. There is a clear attempt to use synonyms to avoid repetition. To reach a higher band, aim for more sophisticated collocations and precise terminology when describing spatial layouts (e.g., 'reconfigured', 'repurposed', or 'expanded').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are frequent errors regarding article usage (e.g., 'kitchen was located' instead of 'the kitchen was located', 'bin was converted' instead of 'the bin was converted') and subject-verb agreement/tense consistency. While these errors do not prevent the reader from understanding the message, they are frequent enough to impact the overall accuracy. Focus on the consistent use of definite and indefinite articles when referring to specific features in a diagram.

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