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Band 5+: The plans below show a museum in 1957, and the same museum in 2013.

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The image shows two maps comparing the layout of a museum in 1957 and 2007. In 1957, the museum had an entrance hall leading to a museum store room, local history room, and national history exhibition with a garden and trees surrounding it. In 2007, the museum expanded to include a reception, museum shop, cafe, education center, special exhibitions, and local history rooms with a car park, while still maintaining a garden area.

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The two pictures illustrate transformation of a museum from 1957 to 2007. Overall, in this area, the main alteration is reduction of trees. Moreover, instead of trees a new car park was settled.

In 1957, the museum full of numerous trees and offered a road which may guide to the entrance of hall. In that year, national history exhibition was located in that north side. In addition, there were many trees in front of the road. Also, local history room and museum store-room were situated next to the entrance.

By 2007, considerable changes had taken place in the museum. This area featured a car park in about bottom-right corner of the map. Furthermore a lot of new facilities had been added. Evidently cafe, reception area, education centre. Moreover,there has been a removed road which was situated at the bottom of the picture. Also, it can be seen that by 2007, the museum was extended significantly.

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The response addresses the task to some extent by comparing the layout of the museum in 1957 and 2007. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the description of the changes, and the overview is not clearly presented.

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The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical errors, including tense inconsistencies, missing articles, and awkward phrasing. Punctuation is also inconsistent.

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