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Band 7+: The plans below show a museum in 1957, and the same museum in 2013.

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The image shows two maps comparing the layout of a museum in 1957 and 2007. In 1957, the museum had an entrance hall leading to a museum store room, local history room, and national history exhibition with a garden and trees surrounding it. In 2007, the museum expanded to include a reception, museum shop, cafe, education center, special exhibitions, and local history rooms with a car park, while still maintaining a garden area.

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The illustrations depict changes to a museum building and grounds in 1957 and 2007. Overall, the building has become much larger and the number of trees has been greatly reduced.

Looking first at the grounds of the museum, the picture in 2007 shows that all the trees have been removed from the roadside, and also most of them to the left and to the rear of the museum. The driveway leading up to the museum has also been removed and a car park has been built by the roadside.

In terms of the building itself, the entrance has been moved from the middle of the building to the left-hand side of the building, where a new museum shop has been built. From there, visitors can go into a new reception room. A cafe has been built on the right-hand side of the building replacing the museum storage room. The National History exhibition room has been turned into a local history room. A special exhibitions room and an education centre have also been added.

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Task Response

The response addresses the task appropriately by summarizing the main features of the museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007. However, there are some minor omissions in the report, such as not mentioning the garden area and the expansion of the museum in 2007.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally coherent and cohesive, with ideas logically organized and linked using appropriate cohesive devices. However, there are some minor lapses in coherence and cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between discussing the grounds and the building.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a wide range of vocabulary, and the language used is generally precise and accurate. There is evidence of flexibility and control in lexical features, with natural and sophisticated word choice.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

A wide range of grammatical structures is used with flexibility and control. Punctuation and grammar are generally used correctly and appropriately throughout the report.

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