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Band 4+: The plans below show a museum in 1957, and the same museum in 2013.

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The image shows two maps comparing the layout of a museum in 1957 and 2007. In 1957, the museum had an entrance hall leading to a museum store room, local history room, and national history exhibition with a garden and trees surrounding it. In 2007, the museum expanded to include a reception, museum shop, cafe, education center, special exhibitions, and local history rooms with a car park, while still maintaining a garden area.

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The presented map depicts information about changes in the local museum between 1957 and 2007.

Overall, it is clear that the building of museum was expansion by added more recreational facilities. In addition, the number of trees significantly decreased.

Turning to details, by 1957, the path which reached to entrance hall had demolished and the location of entrance had changed. In addition, museum surrounded by many lush greens. Although, museum store-room and national history exhibition were in 1957, they were knocked down in 2007.

Moreover, the construction of museum was extended in 2007. As can see clearly, special exhibitions and education center were erected in the above of museum. In such year, local story room which is located in the middle of museum extended rather than in 1957. Furthermore, car park was constructed in 2007 and cafe was replaced by store-room. People enter the museum from the shop building in 2007

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The response addresses the task by comparing the changes in the local museum layout between 1957 and 2007. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report, such as not mentioning the year 1987 and missing some key details.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The report has some coherence and cohesion issues. The organization of ideas could be improved for better clarity and flow. Additionally, there are some awkward phrasings and inconsistencies in referencing the museum's features.

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3.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but it is not always accurate or precise. Some terms are repeated, and there are errors in word choice and usage throughout the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While a variety of sentence structures are attempted, there are several grammatical errors present. Issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage affect the overall accuracy of the report.

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