Band 4+: The provided maps illustrate the change of a student accommodation in 2010 and the present.

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the changes to the student accommodation. It provides a general overview and mentions key differences between the two maps. To improve, include more specific details and data from the diagrams, and ensure accuracy in describing the changes. For example, instead of saying the 'overall accommodation has experienced an increase in its total area,' focus on specific changes like the conversion of the garden into car parking and a student room. Also, avoid generalizations like 'modern and comfortable architect' in the conclusion; instead, reiterate the main changes observed. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information could be improved. The introduction and conclusion are weak and don't effectively frame the changes. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to separate distinct ideas or sets of changes. Use clearer transitions between sentences and paragraphs to guide the reader through the information.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., "amountin," "rised," "saved its position"). To improve, focus on using more specific and descriptive language related to spatial changes and layouts. For example, instead of 'changing small part of garden,' you could say 'converting a portion of the garden.' Consider using synonyms and a wider range of vocabulary to describe the changes more accurately.

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Errors include incorrect word forms ('amountin,' 'rised'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and word choice. Consider using a grammar checker and seeking feedback from others to identify and correct errors.