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Band 4+: The table and chart provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount of money spent by students per week while studying abroad in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a table and a bar chart. The table lists countries A, B, C, D with respective costs in US dollars: A is 875, B is 735, C is 540, D is 435. The bar chart depicting accommodation, tuition, and living cost shows for country A: accommodation 220, tuition 358, living cost 430; for country B: accommodation 280, tuition 320, living cost 350; for country C: accommodation 240, tuition 250, living cost 275; for country D: accommodation 235, tuition 205, living cost 225.

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Tha bar chart below gives information about how much the total expenditure and amount of money spent by student per week while studing in four countries.

0verall, the information of student spend money significantly per week and different student from other country spending money for accomadition, tuiition, living cost. At first glance we can see in country A spent a lot money than spent money in country D. In country A give a lot money for accomodation ,tuiition and living cost around $875, this country over spent money in living cost than accomodation and higher spent money.

Country B spent money around $735 for accomodation,tuiition and living cost on the other hand spent money around $280 is too many spent than country A just around $220 for accomodation. However another countries such as country c and d just spent money lower around $540 and $435 per weeks but we can see country d have different spend money for tuitiion around $235 is higher than accomodation around $200 and living cost around $225.

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money: 11

spent: 9

country: 8

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living: 5

accomodation: 4

student: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains several inaccuracies and omissions. It mentions the overall trend but fails to clearly summarize the main features and make effective comparisons. The data presented is often incorrect (e.g., country A's total is stated as $875, but the breakdown sums to $1008; country D's tuition is given as $235, but the visual description says $205). Additionally, the report lacks a clear structure and contains numerous spelling and grammatical errors that hinder clarity. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the key figures, organizing the information logically (e.g., by country or category), and making clear comparisons between countries. Also, ensure the overview highlights the most significant trends, such as the highest and lowest total expenditures and the dominant cost category.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information but lacks clear progression and logical flow. The introduction is unclear and the overview is vague. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, structure the report with a clear introduction, an overview of main trends, and detailed paragraphs that compare countries systematically. Use linking words and referencing to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with frequent errors in word choice and spelling (e.g., 'accomadition', 'tuiition', 'studing'). There is some attempt to use synonyms, but the range is narrow and lacks sophistication. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'expenditure', 'costs', 'figures', 'comparatively') and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Use precise terms to describe trends and comparisons. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement, incorrect verb forms, and missing articles. Sentence structures are often incomplete or run-on, and punctuation is frequently incorrect. This significantly affects clarity. To improve, practice writing clear, simple sentences and then gradually incorporate more complex structures. Review basic grammar rules, such as verb tense consistency and pluralization, and proofread your work to correct errors.

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