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Band 5+: The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

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The image shows two pie charts and a table about police budget. In 2017, the budget was £9.50bn with 75% from central government(£7.13bn), 21% from local council tax(£2bn), and 4% from other sources(£0.38bn), and in 2018, it was 5% smaller at £9.02bn with the same breakdown. The money was spent on salaries(69%, £6.56bn in 2017, £6.22bn in 2018), buildings and maintenance(17%, £1.62bn in 2017, £1.53bn in 2018), transport(9%, £0.86bn in 2017, £0.81bn in 2018), and police equipment(5%, £0.48bn in 2017, £0.45bn in 2018).

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The provided table and pie charts depict the sources and uses of the Police authorized fund in the UK. According to these charts and table, all data given is in million Sterling pounds and percentages.

Overall, after a thorough analysis of the pie charts and table, what can be discerned is that the National government was the highest contributor to finance the Police budget, and it was mainly distributed to salaries in 2017 and 2018. However, other sources such as grants were the least element of the budget with a minimal disbursement toward Technology was reflected during the period.

It is evident that the National Government was considered the main fund injection of the Police fund. It increased from 175.5m sterling pound in 2017 to exceed 177m sterling pound in 2018. Also, it surpassed a share of 50% of the total budget of the Polic in 2018.

As presented in the pie charts, salaries of officers and staff were captured the highest share of expenditure elements; it reached 75% in 2017 with a slight drop by 6% to reach 69% in 2018, and more than double the share of both Technology and Building and Transport that accumulated for 31% in 2018.

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The report attempts to address the task but suffers from significant inaccuracies regarding the data provided. There is a major discrepancy between the figures reported (e.g., mentioning 175.5m sterling pounds) and the data in the visual description (which specifies billions). Additionally, some categories mentioned in the report, such as 'Technology', do not align clearly with the labels provided in the description. To improve, ensure that all numerical data is transcribed accurately from the visual aids and that the categories mentioned strictly follow the provided labels. Focus on maintaining consistency between the scale of the numbers (millions vs. billions) and the actual data presented.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and imprecise transitions. The overview is a bit wordy ('after a thorough analysis... what can be discerned is that'), which can detract from the clarity of the main trends. To improve, aim for more concise linking words and ensure that each paragraph has a clear, singular focus that flows naturally into the next.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a variety of vocabulary (e.g., 'depict', 'disbursement', 'injection'), but many terms are used inaccurately or in an unnatural way. For example, 'the least element' and 'captured the highest share' are slightly awkward. Additionally, there is some inconsistency in terminology (e.g., switching between 'National government', 'central government', and 'Technology' vs 'police equipment'). Focus on using precise collocations and ensuring that the vocabulary used is appropriate for a formal academic report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede communication. Issues include subject-verb agreement, incorrect preposition usage, and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'were captured the highest share'). There are also errors in noun forms (e.g., 'sterling pound' instead of 'sterling pounds'). To improve, practice using complex structures more accurately and pay close attention to singular/plural agreement and article usage.

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