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Band 4+: The table below shows selected arts events attended in a 12-month period, by age, in the UK (percentages). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a table displaying data across three age brackets labeled '16 – 24', '25 – 44', and '45 – 64' under the column header 'Age' for six activities: Theater performance reports 29 (16 – 24), 37 (25 – 44), and 42 (45 – 64); Carnival and street art reports 28 (16 – 24), 31 (25 – 44), and 27 (45 – 64); Live music event reports 34 (16 – 24), 29 (25 – 44), and 25 (45 – 64); Exhibition of art reports 16 (16 – 24), 23 (25 – 44), and 26 (45 – 64); Craft exhibition reports 5 (16 – 24), 14 (25 – 44), and 21 (45 – 64); and Classical music reports 3 (16 – 24), 5 (25 – 44), and 12 (45 – 64).

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The given table illustrates United Kingdom’s attended arts events (with percentages) in a year period, by age.

Overall, older people usually attend more traditional and cultural activities. Therefore, younger people mostly prefer more popular and social activities.

In the given table, most of the 16-24 age group prefer live music events with of the group among other six events, and classical music (%3) not usually preferred. In 25-44 age group it changes and theater performance () is at the top of the age group, but carnival and street art () come after it with a little difference at amount of percentages (%6) . Classical music is the least preferred event among all age groups ,but it rise from %3-%5 to in 45-64 age group; however, as we said, classical music still has the least percentage between all events and age groups. Also, craft exhibition and exhibition of art events are increase directly proportional to ages. It is crystal clear that ages have amazing role on event preferences in a year at United Kingdoms.

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music: 4

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making comparisons across age groups. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions in the data, such as missing percentages for some events and incorrect figures (e.g., 'theater performance ()' and 'carnival and street art ()'). The overall trend is correctly identified, but the report would benefit from more precise data reporting and clearer organization. Additionally, some sentences are awkwardly phrased and contain grammatical errors, which affect clarity. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately included and use more formal, precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview, but the body paragraph lacks logical organization and clear progression. The message is often difficult to follow due to abrupt shifts between ideas and incomplete sentences. Cohesive devices are used ineffectively, and some references are unclear. To improve, plan the body paragraphs around key trends (e.g., age-related patterns for different event types) and use clear linking words to guide the reader. Ensure each sentence is complete and contributes to a coherent comparison.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'prefer', 'least preferred', 'increase directly proportional'), but there are frequent inaccuracies and awkward phrasings (e.g., 'with of the group among other six events', 'it rise from %3-%5 to in 45-64 age group'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition. To improve, use a wider variety of precise terms (e.g., 'account for', 'constitute', 'notably higher/lower') and ensure correct collocations. Avoid informal expressions like 'it is crystal clear' and 'amazing role' in academic writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that significantly hinder clarity. There are problems with subject-verb agreement, articles, prepositions, and sentence structure (e.g., 'most of the 16-24 age group prefer', 'classical music (%3) not usually preferred', 'it rise from %3-%5 to in 45-64 age group'). The range of grammatical structures is limited, with many simple sentences and incomplete constructions. To improve, review basic grammar rules, practice writing complex sentences with accurate subordinate clauses, and proofread carefully to eliminate errors. Pay attention to correct use of percentages and comparisons.

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