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Band 5+: The table below shows the average number of hours per week that employees spent working remotely in four countries in 2015, 2020 and 2024.

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The image features a table displaying values across four countries for the years 2015, 2020, and 2024. For Kazakhstan, the values are 2 in 2015, 14 in 2020, and 9 in 2024; for Germany, 4 in 2015, 16 in 2020, and 12 in 2024; for Brazil, 5 in 2015, 11 in 2020, and 11 in 2024; and for Japan, 1 in 2015, 6 in 2020, and 8 in 2024.

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The given table illustrates the average number of hours per week that workers spent working remotely in four countries in 2015, 2020 and 2024. There are Kazakhatan, Germany, Brazil and Japan.

Overall, it is clear that the highest percentage of Germany in employees, and the lowest proportion of Japan of workers. But the proportion of kazakhstan fluctusted over the period of employees workers.

Regarding, in 2015, the figure of Kazakhstan 2%. While the proprotion of Kazakhstan significantly increased in 2020 and 2024 was 14% and 9% respectively. Initially, the proportion of Germany in 2015 was 4%. But, In 2020 and 2024 the proportion of Germany rise steadly 16% and 12% respectively.

To commence with, in 2015, the figure of Barazil only 5%. Furthermore, the persentage of Barazil increased 11% as well as same in 2020 and 2024. Additionally, the lowest figure of Japan in 2015 at 1%. After that the proportion of Janpan increased significantly in 2020 and 2024 6% to 8% respectively.

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proportion: 5

germany: 4

kazakhstan: 3

figure: 3

increased: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends in the data for all four countries. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions that affect clarity. For instance, the report refers to 'percentage' instead of 'hours per week', which is a key misinterpretation of the data. Additionally, some data points are inaccurately described (e.g., Brazil's figures are stated as 'increased 11% as well as same in 2020 and 2024', which is confusing). The report also lacks a clear overview of the overall trends, such as the general increase from 2015 to 2020 followed by a decrease in some countries by 2024. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the units, providing a clear summary of the main trends, and ensuring that all data points are correctly described. Organize the information more logically, perhaps by grouping countries with similar patterns, and avoid repetitive phrasing.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'the highest percentage of Germany in employees'). The overview is somewhat vague and could be more precise. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively managed to group related information. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use cohesive devices more naturally to link sentences and ideas.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'illustrates', 'proportion', 'increased', 'respectively'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'Kazakhatan', 'fluctusted', 'proprotion', 'steadly', 'Barazil', 'persentage', 'Janpan') and some awkward word choices (e.g., 'the highest percentage of Germany in employees'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing trends and comparisons, and ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and some complex sentences, but there are numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include missing articles ('the figure of Kazakhstan 2%'), incorrect verb forms ('the proportion of Germany rise steadly'), and subject-verb agreement problems. Punctuation is often incorrect (e.g., missing commas, incorrect use of 'But,'). To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and punctuation. Reviewing grammar rules and proofreading can help enhance accuracy.

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