Multiple Graphs

Band 6+: The table below shows the numbers of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australian states for last year. The pie chart below shows percentages of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the same 5 Australian states.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The table below shows the numbers of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australian states for last year. The pie chart below shows percentages of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the same 5 Australian states.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image contains two tables and a pie chart for last year’s same day and overnight stays in thousands across public and private hospitals in Australian states New South Wales, Victoria, Queensland, Western Australia, and South Australia. Table 1 data: Public General (NSW: 5,816, Victoria: 4,547, Queensland: 3,030, WA: 1,647, SA: 1,495), Public Psychiatric (NSW: 281, Victoria: 59, Queensland: 98, WA: 75, SA: 97), Total Public Hospitals (NSW: 6,097, Victoria: 4,607, Queensland: 3,128, WA: 1,722, SA: 1,591), Private General (NSW: 2,012, Victoria: 2,047, Queensland: 1,850, WA: 726, SA: 560), Private Psychiatric (NSW: 213, Victoria: 188, Queensland: 213, WA: 103, SA: 57), Total Private Hospitals (NSW: 2,225, Victoria: 2,235, Queensland: 2,063, WA: 829, SA: 617), All Hospitals (NSW: 8,322, Victoria: 6,842, Queensland: 5,191, WA: 2,552, SA: 2,209). Pie Chart: Public overnight 30%, Public same day 30%, Private overnight 14%, Private same day 26%.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The given pictures illustrates the number of same day and overnight stays in both private and public hospitals located in 5 distinct Australian regions. The figures are measured in thousands.

It is clear that, although New South Wales was dominant in receiving sick people, hospitals in South Australia received the least amount of patients.It is also evident that most of patients prefer public hospitals over the private ones throughout all states.

Looking at the table in more detail, we can see that New South Caroline had the highest number of sick people, accounting for 6,097 in public hospitals and 2,225 in private ones.

Public hospitals in Victoria received 4,607 patients, which was 3 ttimes higher than those in South Australia.

According to the pie chart, private and public same day stays were responsible for 26% and 30% respectively. The figures for private overnight stays was 14%, which was 2-fold lower than public overnight attendances.

Word Count: 154

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

private: 5

public: 5

hospitals: 5

south: 4

overnight: 3

stays: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing both the table and the pie chart, and it highlights key trends such as the dominance of New South Wales and the preference for public hospitals. However, there are some omissions and minor inaccuracies: the report does not mention the specific data for Queensland, Western Australia, and South Australia in the table, and it incorrectly states 'New South Caroline' instead of 'New South Wales'. Additionally, the phrase '3 ttimes higher' contains a typo. To improve, ensure all states are covered and check for spelling errors. Overall, the response is relevant and sufficiently detailed, but could be more comprehensive.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The introduction clearly paraphrases the task, and the overview effectively highlights key trends. The body paragraphs logically separate the table and pie chart information. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition from the overview to the detailed analysis of the table. Using more cohesive devices (e.g., 'In terms of the table...', 'Turning to the pie chart...') would improve the flow. Additionally, the paragraphing could be more skillfully managed by grouping related data more consistently.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and generally appropriate for the task. There is some good use of synonyms (e.g., 'dominant', 'received', 'accounting for'). However, there are instances of less precise or informal phrasing, such as 'receiving sick people' and 'most of patients prefer'. The phrase '2-fold lower' is slightly awkward; 'half that of' would be more natural. To achieve a higher score, aim for a wider range of sophisticated and precise vocabulary, such as 'admissions', 'patient numbers', 'accounted for', and 'comprised'. Avoid informal expressions and ensure collocations are accurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, including comparative forms and complex sentences. However, there are several errors and inaccuracies that affect clarity. For example, 'The given pictures illustrates' should be 'The given pictures illustrate' (subject-verb agreement). 'New South Caroline' is a misspelling of 'New South Wales'. '3 ttimes' is a typo. 'The figures for private overnight stays was' should be 'were'. 'most of patients' should be 'most patients' or 'the majority of patients'. To improve, proofread carefully for subject-verb agreement, article usage, and spelling. Using a wider variety of sentence structures with consistent accuracy would help achieve a higher band.

Answers On The Same Topic:

See All

The charts below show the average temperatures in 12months in three cities and how many hours of sunshinethese cities have in a year.Summarise the information byselecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the average temperatures in London, Sydney, New York from january to december. This figures divide into London, New York, and Sydney. Overall, looking at the first month, London and New York was started at low temperatures, whereas Sydney was recorded at high temperatures. The temperature trend of London was similar to […]

Band 5+

The chart below shows the average time UK workers spent travelling to work and their methods of transportation in 2009.

The charts show how much time employees in the UK spend travelling to work and how they travel in 2009. Overall, the majority of employees spend relatively less time traveling to work. While cars were the most popular method of transportation with both workers in London and other parts of the UK, almost nobody used […]

Band 7+

The charts below show the main sources of funding for wildlife conservation in Africa and South America for the years 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs illustrate the major sources of wildlife conservation funding in Africa and South America in 2010 and 2020. The sources mentioned in the chart are: government grants, private donations, corporate sponsorships, and tourism revenue. In Africa, government grants were a major source of funds in 2010(120) and it had a marginal gain in 2020, […]

Band 7+

See All

Band 6+: The table below shows the numbers of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australian states for last year. The pie chart below shows percentages of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the same 5 Australian states.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

The table below shows the numbers of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australian states for last year. The pie chart below shows percentages of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the same 5 Australian states.

The table below shows the numbers of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australian states for last year. The pie chart below shows percentages of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the same 5 Australian states.

The table below shows the numbers of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australian states for last year. The pie chart below shows percentages of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the same 5 Australian states.

The table below shows the numbers of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australian states for last year. The pie chart below shows percentages of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the same 5 Australian states.

Other Topics:

Task 1: The charts below show the percentage of food and goods bought from supermarkets in European countries in 1998 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average temperatures in 12months in three cities and how many hours of sunshinethese cities have in a year.Summarise the information byselecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the average time UK workers spent travelling to work and their methods of transportation in 2009.

The pie charts below show the percentage of students on one adult education center taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the main sources of funding for wildlife conservation in Africa and South America for the years 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium