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Band 4+: The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a table with data on participation in cultural activities among different age groups in Scotland. For ages 16-24, percentages are: Any performance 35, Undertaking any crafts 11, Cultural purchases 11, Any visual arts 30, Any writing 17, Computer based 10. Ages 25-44, percentages are: Any performance 22, Undertaking any crafts 17, Cultural purchases 17, Any visual arts 16, Any writing 6, Computer based 9. Ages 45-74, percentages are: Any performance 17, Undertaking any crafts 22, Cultural purchases 18, Any visual arts 11, Any writing 5, Computer based 5. For all aged 16 and over, percentages are: Any performance 22, Undertaking any crafts 19, Cultural purchases 16, Any visual arts 15, Any writing 7, Computer based 6.

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The table illustrates the percentage of 6800 Scotland citizens aging 16 years and over, about their preference in different cultural activities in one year.

Overall, any performance was the most popular activity in all age bracket except for people who aged 45-74. Meanwhile, computer based had the lowest participation rate.

The most favorite activities for Scottish that aged for 16-24 were Any performance and visual arts, at 35% and 30% respectively. In contrast, the other activities has much lower proportion, at 17% participation for Writing. Whereas, Craft and Cultural purchases had the same number, at 11%, Lastly 10% Participation for Computer based activity.

Turning to the older age brackets (25-44 and 45-74), Performance and Craft still the most chosen activities, although, the rate was lower only at 22% and 17% respectively. However,

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activities: 4

performance: 3

participation: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task but is incomplete, as the final paragraph ends abruptly mid-sentence. While the overview identifies key trends and the data for the first age group is reported accurately, the lack of a conclusion or a completed comparison for the remaining age groups significantly limits the response. To improve, ensure that all sections of the report are fully developed and that the comparison between all age groups is completed to provide a comprehensive summary. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is incomplete, as it ends abruptly with 'However,', which significantly impacts the flow and prevents a full summary of the data. While there is an attempt to use cohesive devices like 'Overall', 'Meanwhile', and 'In contrast', the logical progression is interrupted by the unfinished conclusion. To improve, ensure that you complete all paragraphs and use transitions to link the different age groups more smoothly. Aim to group data logically so that the comparison between age brackets is clear and continuous.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat repetitive and contains several awkward phrasings (e.g., 'the most favorite activities for Scottish that aged for 16-24'). There is a limited range of synonyms for 'participation' or 'percentage'. To reach a higher band, try to use more varied academic vocabulary, such as 'prevalence', 'proportion', 'engagement', or 'frequency'. Additionally, ensure that nouns and adjectives are used correctly in context (e.g., 'Scottish citizens' instead of 'Scottish that aged').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors throughout the report, particularly regarding subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the other activities has') and sentence structure (e.g., 'Performance and Craft still the most chosen activities' is missing a verb). There are also issues with preposition usage and word forms. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures, ensuring every sentence has a clear subject and verb, and practicing the use of complex sentences to combine data points effectively.

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