Table

Band 5+: The table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults whether they had taken part in different cultural activties

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults whether they had taken part in different cultural activties

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image presents a table detailing the participation in cultural activities by age among 6800 Scottish adults aged 16 and over. For ages 16-24, "Any performance*" participation is 35%, "Undertaking any crafts" is 11%, "Cultural purchases" is 11%, "Any visual arts" is 30%, "Any writing" is 17%, and "Computer based" is 10%. Ages 25-44 show "Any performance*" at 22%, "Undertaking any crafts" at 17%, "Cultural purchases" at 17%, "Any visual arts" at 16%, "Any writing" at 10%, and "Computer based" at 9%. For the 45-74 age group, "Any performance*" is 17%, "Undertaking any crafts" rises to 22%, "Cultural purchases" is 18%, "Any visual arts" is 11%, "Any writing" is 6%, and "Computer based" is 5%. Overall, for all aged 16 and over, the participation rates are: "Any performance*" 22%, "Undertaking any crafts" 19%, "Cultural purchases" 18%, "Any visual arts" 15%, "Any writing" 7%, and "Computer based" 6%. *Activities include dancing, singing, playing musical instruments, and acting.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The table chart given illustrates the outcome of an investigation about the rate of the participation of scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) to various cultural activities in that year.

Overall; the biggest participation is by far in the performance based activities(dancing,singing,acting…) with a downright trend based on the ages.In the other hand the second least popular activies are computer based ones with an decrease of participations by age.

While performance based exercices had the biggest attendance are the most popular activities in between the ages of 16 and 24 at 35%, between the participants over the age of 45 it fluctuated to 17% and to the 3th most popular activitiy.Likewise the computer based activities also had a downright trend by ages but also it had the lowes overall participation.On the contrary at the cultural purchases side there is an upright graphic depending on age.Between the artistic activities visual arts were popular by a big margin.

Word Count: 157

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
Continue to challenge and refine your language choices.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

based: 5

activities: 4

popular: 4

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing some main features and making comparisons, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, it incorrectly states that computer-based activities had the lowest overall participation (actually writing had the lowest at 7%), and it fails to mention key data points such as the exact percentages for crafts and cultural purchases across age groups. The report also lacks a clear overview of the overall trends, and some statements are vague or unclear (e.g., 'upright graphic depending on age'). To improve, ensure all main features are accurately reported, include specific figures, and provide a clear summary of the main trends and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'In the other hand' is incorrect and should be 'On the other hand', and the sentence 'While performance based exercices had the biggest attendance are the most popular activities...' is confusing due to a missing subject and verb agreement. The paragraphing is not skilfully managed; the report would benefit from clearer separation of overview and detailed comparisons. To improve, use cohesive devices such as 'in contrast', 'similarly', and 'overall' more effectively, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and repetitive, with errors such as 'downright trend' (should be 'downward trend'), 'upright graphic' (should be 'upward trend'), and 'activies' (should be 'activities'). The report uses some appropriate terms like 'participation' and 'cultural activities', but lacks the range and precision expected for a high band score. To improve, use a wider variety of synonyms (e.g., 'proportion', 'rate', 'engagement') and ensure correct word forms and collocations (e.g., 'a downward trend', 'a significant proportion').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity, including subject-verb agreement ('the biggest participation is' should be 'the highest participation is'), incorrect comparative forms ('the 3th most popular' should be 'the third most popular'), and missing articles ('the performance based activities' should be 'performance-based activities'). There are also punctuation issues, such as the misuse of semicolons and commas. The range of sentence structures is limited, with many run-on sentences. To improve, focus on sentence structure variety, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for punctuation and spelling errors.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults whether they had taken part in different cultural activties

The table illustrates the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults (aged 16 years and above) whether they had taken part in six different cultural activities (Any performance, Undertaking any crafts, Cultural purchases, Any visual arts, Any writing, and Computer based). Overall, it can be seen that the youngest and oldest groups had […]

Band 7+

The table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults whether they had taken part in different cultural activties

The table demonstrates what percentage of Scottish inhabitants participated in six different activities throughout the last year. In general, any performances, undertaking crafts and visual arts were more frequent answers among all the age groups. In contrast, cultural purposes, writing and computer based activities seemed to be less attractive to the participants. People at the […]

Band 6+

The table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults whether they had taken part in different cultural activties

The table gives information about the percentage of Scottish adults in different age groups who joined in several cultural activities during the last 12 months. Overall, people aged 16 to 24 took part in cultural activities more than the other groups, while older people had lower participation. Doing performance was the most popular activity among […]

Band 7+

The table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults whether they had taken part in different cultural activties

The table exhibits the comparison of activities (any performance, undertaking crafts, cultural purchases, visual arts, writing and computing) which are participated by several groups of people: 16-24, 25-44, 45-74 as well as all individuals who aged 16 and over. The information was provided in percentages (%). Overall, the highest figure in any performance section is […]

Band 6+

See All

The table presents how much people from five employment sectors earned, in three different salary levels in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the maximum, minimum and average earnings across five employment sectors in 2009. Overall, finance was the highest-paying sector at every level, while hospitality and construction paid the least. Another notable feature is that finance had the biggest gap between its top and bottom earners. Finance workers earned the most, with maximum, minimum […]

Band 8+

The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 to 2004.

The table illustrates the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004. Overall, an upward trend can be observed in the figures for skilled and unskilled workers, while the opposite trend was seen in the percentage of employers having difficulty finding technical and managerial staff. While manufacturing became […]

Band 8+

The table shows the two age groups participating in the marathon from 2008 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the two age groups involving in the marathon between 2008 and 2012. Overall, it is evident that the total number of participants and the participation increased steadily in both age groups and rose constantly throughout the years. However, individuals aged 18 to 39 tended to take part in marathon greater than the […]

Band 6+

Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries.

the table show social and economic for four countries namely canada, jepang, peru and zaire in 1994. the information includes annual income per person, life expectancy at birth, daily calorie supply, and adult literacy rate. overall, canada and japan had much higher figures for most indicators than peru and zaire. japan had the highest annual […]

Band 5+

See All

Band 5+: The table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults whether they had taken part in different cultural activties

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

The table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults whether they had taken part in different cultural activties

The table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults whether they had taken part in different cultural activties

The table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults whether they had taken part in different cultural activties

The table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults whether they had taken part in different cultural activties

Other Topics:

The table presents how much people from five employment sectors earned, in three different salary levels in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 to 2004.

The table shows the two age groups participating in the marathon from 2008 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between between 2000 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words

The table below shows the number of gold, silver, and bronze medals won by the top 10 countries in 2004 Olympics, along with their total medal counts. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium