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The image presents a table of worldwide mobile phone sales expressed as percent market share for the years 2005 and 2006. In 2005: Nokia with 32.5%, Motorola with 17.7%, Samsung 12.7%, Sony Ericsson 6.3%, L.G. 6.7%, BenQ Mobile 4.9%, Others 19.2%, totaling 100%. In 2006: Nokia with 35%, Motorola with 21.1%, Samsung 11.8%, Sony Ericsson 7.4%, L.G. 6.3%, BenQ Mobile 2.4%, Others 16.2%, totaling 100%.

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The table ilustsrates the global share market in percentage for the seven different smartphone manufacturing companies for the years 2005 and 2006.

Overall, in both years, Nokia was widely famous, while BenQ Mobile was the least favored by the users.

In 2005, Nokia had 32.5% of the share market, whereas in 2006 the percentage rose by almost 2% and became 35%. Similiary, Motorola also experienced nearly 4% of jump from 17.7% to 21.1%. However, Sony Ericsson had a minimal rise in percentege, which was from 6.3% to 7.4%.

Samsung, LG, BenQ Mobile, and others experienced a drop in the share market within a year. Samsung and LG had a marginal change, which was less than a percentage, but BenQ Mobile had over a two percentage point drop, while others had to expereince a noticeable reduction from 19.2% to 16.2%.

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The report effectively addresses the task by highlighting the key trends and comparing the market shares of the various manufacturers. The overview is clear, and the data is presented logically, grouping companies with increasing shares and those with decreasing shares. To improve, ensure that the terminology remains strictly academic; for instance, using 'market leader' instead of 'widely famous' and 'lowest market share' instead of 'least favored' would be more appropriate for a data report. Additionally, be mindful of minor spelling errors such as 'ilustlustrates', 'Similiary', and 'expereince'. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is organized into logical paragraphs, with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas could be smoother. Some cohesive devices are used (e.g., 'Overall', 'In 2005', 'However'), but there are some mechanical errors in transitions. To improve, ensure that the connection between sentences feels more natural and less like a list of data points. Using more varied linking words to show contrast or comparison would enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, and you have attempted to use varied terms like 'marginal change' and 'noticeable reduction'. However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'ilustlustrates', 'Similiary', 'percentege', 'expereince') and some slightly awkward phrasing (e.g., 'widely famous' is not the most appropriate way to describe market share; 'market leader' would be better). Aim for higher precision in your word choices and double-check spelling to ensure a more professional tone.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

You demonstrate a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical inaccuracies that prevent a higher score. For example, '4% of jump' should be 'a 4% jump', and 'had to expereince' is an incorrect use of the modal verb in this context. There are also issues with article usage and prepositional accuracy. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement and the correct use of articles and prepositions when describing trends and data changes.

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