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Band 7+: The table shows the number of tourists visiting three countries in 2010 and 2023. The pie chart shows the main purpose of visits to Country C in 2023. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a table titled "Table: Number of tourists (millions)" and a pie chart titled "Pie chart: Purpose of visit to Country C, 2023 (%)". The table lists tourist numbers in millions for three countries across two years: Country A with 12 in 2010 and 18 in 2023; Country B with 8 in 2010 and 7 in 2023; and Country C with 5 in 2010 and 14 in 2023. The pie chart displays proportions for visit purposes to Country C in 2023: Holiday at 46%, Business at 22%, Visiting family at 19%, Study at 8%, and Other at 5%.

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The table compares how many people traveled to three countries over a thirteen-year period in 2010 and 2023, while the pie charts illustrate why they visited to these places.

Overall, while the number of visitors rose in The UK and France, that of in Canada comprised the reverse. Although the visiting rate in France grew noticeably, the UK remained its leading position throughout the period. Moreover, holiday and business were the main motivations for paying a visit in France.

Focusing first on the table, The UK was visited by 12 million travelers, considerably more than Canada, 18 million, and France a mere 5 million in 2010. By 2023, the UK had increased significantly to 18 million. Canada experienced a slight fall to 8 million, whereas the number of visitors in France climbed to 14 million.

Turning to the pir chart, holiday was the most common reason for travelling, standing at a high of 46%. Following closely behind was business, whose share stood at 22%. While the percentage of visiting family represented 19%, those of study and unknown purposes comprised a mere 8% and 5% respectively.

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million: 5

france: 4

while: 3

canada: 3

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Task Response

The response appropriately covers the requirements of the task by summarizing the main features of both the table and the pie chart, and making relevant comparisons. The overview is clear, and key trends are identified. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data presentation: for example, the report states that Canada had 18 million visitors in 2010, whereas the table shows 8 million. Additionally, the report refers to 'The UK', 'France', and 'Canada' instead of the generic 'Country A', 'Country B', and 'Country C' used in the visual, which could be seen as an assumption not supported by the task. The pie chart data is accurately reported. To improve, ensure all data is accurately transcribed and avoid introducing specific country names unless they are provided in the task. Overall, the response is well-organized and addresses the task effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall structure: introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs for the table and pie chart. The use of cohesive devices such as 'while', 'moreover', 'focusing first on', and 'turning to' helps guide the reader. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the phrase 'that of in Canada' which is awkward and disrupts flow. Additionally, the overview could be more clearly separated from the introduction. Overall, the message is easy to follow, but there is room for improvement in the smoothness of transitions and clarity of referencing.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, including terms like 'considerably more than', 'experienced a slight fall', 'climbed to', and 'standing at a high of'. There is evidence of flexibility and some sophisticated control. However, there are a few inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'why they visited to these places' (should be 'why they visited these places'), 'the visiting rate in France' (could be 'the number of visitors to France'), and 'the pir chart' (typo for 'pie chart'). These minor errors slightly detract from the overall lexical precision. To improve, focus on using more precise and natural collocations and proofread for typos.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences with subordinate clauses, and demonstrates good control of grammar. There are, however, a few grammatical errors and awkward constructions: 'why they visited to these places' (unnecessary 'to'), 'that of in Canada' (incorrect phrasing), 'the visiting rate in France' (should be 'the number of visitors to France'), and 'those of study and unknown purposes' (should be 'the percentages for study and other purposes'). Punctuation is generally correct, but these errors, while not frequent, are noticeable. To achieve a higher score, ensure that all structures are used accurately and that phrasing is natural and idiomatic.

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