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The image shows bar charts with data split for the years 1996 and 2000: in "Percentage of films released", Drama 1996=20%, 2000=25%, Comedy 1996=25%, 2000=20%, Fantasy 1996=10%, 2000=15%, Romance 1996=5%, 2000=5%; in "Percentage of Cinema ticket sales", Drama 1996=10%, 2000=12%, Comedy 1996=20%, 2000=23%, Fantasy 1996=5%, 2000=8%, Romance 1996=5%, 2000=5%.

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The graph shows us the data of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales beetween 1996 and 2006 in a country.

In 1996,The Drama takes 25% film relase and 15% of cinema ticket sales.while 2006 it’s release was increase become 35% and the ticket was almost the same beetween 15-16%.

And about the Comedy films, it start 20% in 1996 and the percentage of cinema ticket sales is 20%, in 2006 the comedy film ticket was increase the film released become 25% aand the ticket sales was the most highest than the others it was 23%

Fantasy movie is releasing their movie by 12% in 1996 and the ticket sales was two percent. And in 2006 fantasy movie was released more bigger than 1996 it was 17% and the ticket sales was increasing a bit by six percent

And the Romance movie placing the fourth rank for the production and the ticket sales. both beetween 1996 and 2006 only 5% released. but in 1996s the sales is more higher than 2006 it was sell by 5% in 1996 and 1% in 2006

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

ticket: 9

sales: 7

released: 4

movie: 4

beetween: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with clarity. To improve, ensure data is accurately represented and focus on making clearer comparisons between the years.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is presented in a somewhat disorganized manner, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate different aspects of the data. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and sentences. For example, use transition words like 'however,' 'in contrast,' 'similarly,' and 'overall' to guide the reader through the information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, which limits the ability to convey the information accurately and concisely. There are instances of imprecise word choice. Expand your vocabulary related to describing data and trends. Use synonyms and varied language to avoid repetition. For example, instead of always using 'increase,' try 'rise,' 'grow,' or 'expand.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Practice writing simple sentences correctly before attempting more complex structures. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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