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Band 4+: The two graphs below show the percentage of smokers and the consumption of alcohol in litres in selected countries for the period 1960 - 2000.

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The image displays two line graphs. The top graph titled "% of Population who smoke every-day" includes data for USA, Japan, and Holland from 1960 to 2000. The visible data points are approximately: USA (1960 ~50%, 1970 ~45%, 1980 ~35%, 1990 ~30%, 2000 ~25%), Japan (1960 ~55%, 1970 ~50%, 1980 ~35%, 1990 ~30%, 2000 ~25%), Holland (1960 ~60%, 1970 ~50%, 1980 ~40%, 1990 ~33%, 2000 ~28%). The bottom graph titled "Alcohol consumption in litres per person" includes data for Turkey, Holland, and USA from 1960 to 2000. The visible data points are approximately: Turkey (1960 ~2 liters, 1970 ~4 liters, 1980 ~6 liters, 1990 ~5 liters, 2000 ~5 liters), Holland (1960 ~6 liters, 1970 ~9 liters, 1980 ~11 liters, 1990 ~10 liters, 2000 ~9 liters), USA (1960 ~7 liters, 1970 ~8 liters, 1980 ~9 liters, 1990 ~8 liters, 2000 ~7 liters).

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The two different graphs illustrate the people who smoke in countries such as the USA ,Japan,Holland and consumption of who drinks alcohol in litres in selected countries such as Turkey,Holland,the USA for period in 1960-2000

Overall,it is clear seen that,the percentage of smokers in all categories withnessed decrease.While alcohol consumption in litres per person all categories fluctuating .

Population who smoke everyday in 1960,Holland began with 59 percent and it dropped in 1980,roughly 42 percent.However the figure remained stable until 1970.Second was the USA started with 40 percent in 2000,it fell by half .The third was Japan it significantly decreased which started 49 and in 2000, it approximately 34 percent which like the USA.

In contrast,alcohol consumption in litres per person the all categories showed fluctuating .In 1960,Holland started with 4 percent and it rose rapidly approximately 11 percent which was more than double until 1960.However,after 1960 it dropped slightly it about 10 percent.

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The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data presented. The organization is acceptable, but the language could be more precise and varied. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the graphs and using a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons.

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The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, and the transitions between sentences and paragraphs are weak. The 'Overall' paragraph is a good attempt at summarising, but it is too general and lacks specific details. Paragraphing needs improvement to group related information effectively. For example, the description of smoking trends could be better structured to compare and contrast the different countries more clearly. The report also suffers from a lack of clear referencing to the graphs, making it difficult to follow the information presented.

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The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of more sophisticated language to describe trends and comparisons. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'dropped' or 'decreased,' try using a wider range of vocabulary such as 'declined,' 'diminished,' or 'reduced.' The report also contains some inaccuracies in word choice and usage, which affect clarity. To improve, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to describing trends and data, and ensure accurate usage.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear, making it difficult to understand the intended meaning. Punctuation errors are also present. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct errors, but always review the suggestions critically to ensure they are appropriate for the context.

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