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Band 4+: Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the protein and calorie intakes of people in different parts of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image displays two bar charts: the first chart shows average protein intake in grams for four regions—India (13 animal, 15 other), East Africa (16 animal, 15 other), Latin America (32 animal, 13 other), and North America (62 animal, 18 other). The second chart shows average calorie intake: India (2000), East Africa (2300), Latin America (2800), and North America (3600).

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The following bar graph illustrates the protein and calorie intakes of individuals in various parts of countries india, east africa, latin america and north america of the world.

Overall, the both other protein and animals protein are increased respectevily. The heighest number of protein in north america. whereas the lowest in india. consiquently, east africa is least to compared with latin america.

Looking at the graph, india is the lowest intake in both protein of the number of nearly 11 and almost 28 respectively. In additions, latain america is heighest to compared with the east america in the number of 30 and approximately 45. Finally, North america is the heighest number of both protein which number is 80 in the figure. In overall the both protein is significantely grew in the figure. where the north america in the peak and india at least in the graph.

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protein: 7

america: 7

number: 5

india: 4

north: 4

graph: 3

heighest: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the main features of the charts, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The data for calorie intake is not mentioned at all, which is a key requirement. Additionally, the figures for protein intake are often incorrect (e.g., India's animal protein is stated as 11 instead of 13, and North America's total is given as 80 instead of 80, which is correct, but the breakdown is not clear). The report also includes some irrelevant or confusing statements (e.g., 'east america' instead of 'East Africa') and has issues with clarity and organization. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data for both charts, make clear comparisons, and ensure the report is well-structured and free of errors. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and an overview, but the flow of ideas is often disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'consiquently', 'In additions'). Paragraphing is not effectively managed, as the second paragraph combines multiple comparisons without clear organization. To improve, use clear topic sentences, logical sequencing of information, and a range of linking words (e.g., 'whereas', 'in contrast', 'similarly') to guide the reader smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'heighest', 'respectevily', 'latain', 'significantely') and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'parts of countries india' instead of 'regions'). There is some attempt to use comparative language, but it is not always accurate or natural. To improve, expand your range of topic-specific vocabulary (e.g., 'intake', 'consumption', 'exceeds', 'substantially higher') and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Use precise terms to describe data trends and comparisons.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect use of articles, and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'the both other protein and animals protein are increased respectevily'). Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive, with limited use of complex forms. Punctuation is often missing or misused. To improve, practice writing clear, grammatically correct sentences, and vary your sentence structures by using subordinate clauses and passive constructions where appropriate. Review basic grammar rules, especially for pluralization, articles, and verb tense consistency.

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