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Band 5+: The two maps below show a small village in the west of Ireland in the year 2000 and at the present time.

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The image shows a comparison of land use changes in an area from the year 2000 to the present. In 2000, the area had a large section of farmland, a market, a dock, a shop, housing, and a hotel. In the present, the farmland has been replaced by a park, the market has been replaced by restaurants, the dock remains unchanged, there is an additional shop, additional housing, a car park has been added, and the hotel remains unchanged.

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The maps depict a small village in west of Ireland has developed since the year 2000.

Overall, despite some features remaining the same, this small rural village has transformed into more residential one, with significant changes in public amenities and transport infrastructure.

In 2000, there was a farmland, which occupied northwest side of the village. There were four shops nearby a road, which ran from west to east side and another connected road went through middle of the suburban area. There was a dock nearby the market.

In the present day, farmland has been fully converted in a park. Dock has been removed by the village. Market shops have been transformed in four restaurants. Housing colony extended and added six more new houses with extension of housing road. In northeast side new small houses have been installed with a small road which attached with main road of the village. One hotel has been added near to a carpark in east side of the suburban area.

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the changes in the village from 2000 to the present day. The overview is acceptable, and the main changes are identified. However, the description could be more precise and comprehensive. For example, the report mentions 'four shops nearby a road' but doesn't clearly distinguish between the single shop and the market in 2000. Also, the description of the present day could be more accurate (e.g., the dock remains, not removed). To improve, focus on providing more specific details and ensuring accuracy in describing the changes and features in both time periods.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. Paragraphing could be improved to group related information more effectively. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes weak, making it harder for the reader to follow the changes described. For example, the connection between the description of the village in 2000 and the present day could be smoother.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, and some word choices are not entirely accurate or natural. For instance, phrases like 'housing colony extended' could be rephrased for better clarity and precision. To improve, try to incorporate a wider variety of vocabulary related to urban development and land use changes. Focus on using synonyms and more specific terms to describe the transformations. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. For example, 'west of Ireland has developed' should be 'west of Ireland has developed'. There are also issues with article usage and prepositional phrases. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Pay close attention to verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.

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