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Band 6+: The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The image presents two maps of an island, "Before" and "After" development. The "Before" map shows an undeveloped island with a beach on the west side and 8 palm trees (a cluster of 3 and a cluster of 5). The "After" map shows the addition of tourist facilities: a central Reception building, a Restaurant to its north, and a pier on the southern coast. There are two groups of accommodation huts: a western cluster with 6 huts and an eastern cluster with 9 huts. A network of footpaths connects all buildings and leads to the beach, which now has a designated "swimming" area. A motorboat and a sailboat are shown in the sea south of the pier. The number of palm trees has been reduced to 6.

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The two maps illustrate the previous and subsequent construction of some tourist facilities in an island.

Overall, over the period of time the island has witnessed dramatic changes. New construction includes a restaurant and accommodation.

Before, the island was devoid of tourist facilities can only be seen with barren land with few trees, surrounded by the sea and a beach. The trees were not removed but kept intact during the development. After, there was a dramatic development on the island for tourist facilities. They opened up a restaurant with accommodation and a reception. Towards the northwest, a restaurant has been set up, and the footpath is connected to the reception slightly away from the restaurant; beside the reception to the west, 6 accommodations were set up around the trees; to the edge of the beach in the far west, a swimming pool has been built. Shifting the focus towards the east side of the island, there are again 8 accommodations beside the cluster of trees. Towards the far end in the south direction, there’s a ship and a boat docked to transport tourists.

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tourist: 3

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trees: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the main changes on the island, such as the addition of tourist facilities and the network of footpaths. It provides a clear overall view and includes some specific details. However, there are a few inaccuracies and omissions: the pier is not mentioned, the number of accommodations is slightly off, and the swimming area is described as a swimming pool, which is not accurate. The report could also improve by making more direct comparisons between the before and after maps, and by ensuring all key features are accurately reported.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview, and it attempts to organize information by location. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'Before, the island was devoid of tourist facilities can only be seen with barren land'). The paragraphing is not consistently logical, and the description jumps between locations without clear signposting. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and cohesive devices to guide the reader through the changes.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary related to maps and development (e.g., 'witnessed dramatic changes', 'devoid of tourist facilities', 'set up', 'docked'). However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward choices (e.g., 'a ship and a boat docked' instead of 'a motorboat and a sailboat', 'swimming pool' instead of 'swimming area', 'accommodations' instead of 'accommodation huts'). The language is not always precise or natural. To improve, use more specific and accurate terms, and avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical issues that affect clarity. For example, 'Before, the island was devoid of tourist facilities can only be seen with barren land' is a run-on sentence with a missing relative pronoun. Also, 'there's a ship and a boat docked' uses a singular verb with a plural subject. While the errors are not frequent, they are noticeable and sometimes impede understanding. To improve, focus on sentence construction and subject-verb agreement.

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