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Band 5+: The two pie charts below show how adults in a certain country spend their leisure time in 2010 and 2020.

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The image contains two pie charts comparing leisure activity distribution among adults in 2010 and 2020. In 2010: Watching TV (35%), Social Media (31%), Reading (20%), Exercise (9%), Outdoor Hobbies (3%), Other (1%). In 2020: Watching TV (30%), Social Media (35%), Reading (25%), Exercise (10%), Outdoor Hobbies (1%), Other (1%).

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The pie charts compare how much time adults spend participating in outdoor activities in the years 2010 and 2020.

As the first diagram displays, watching TV overtook the other hobbies in 2010, with the highest percentage. In 2020 however, highest rank for the most participated in hobby went to social media.

It is clear in 2010, watching tv was the most enjoyed activity to do, taking up 35% of adults time, coming in second was social media, with a figure of 25%. In 2020, these two activities switched places, where 35% of adults spent time on social media and 25% spent it watching tv.

Time spent on exercise was greater in 2010, taking up 19% of adults time and mitigating to becoming 15% in 2020. Reading suffered the biggest decrease, from taking up 20% of adults time in 2010 to only taking up 10% of their time in 2020.

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adults: 5

taking: 4

watching: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by comparing leisure time activities across the two years. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data presented. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraph structure. Some grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language to describe the changes in leisure activities.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the report demonstrates some grammatical range, there are several errors that impact the overall clarity and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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